Comments | dejavu_love: impossible.

dejavu_love

impossible.

Mar 04, 2012 23:42

( Kibum found himself sitting on the cold, slightly damp, concrete floor of a rooftop, bottles of soju before him - three unopened, one half-drunk, one empty, and one under his foot )

minho, drabble, one-shot, key, jonghyun

Comments 7

nhiphuong March 4 2012, 17:03:51 UTC

this is so beautiful... i mean ur writing. rly enjoyed reading it, the way u expressed key's feeling by words. And ofc the hint of minkey is lovely too.
its not rly impossible, Key. u have to follow ur heart sometimes

dejavu_love March 5 2012, 13:16:22 UTC

thank you so much! im glad you enjoyed it. =) haha.. this is just how i view key.. a lot of repressed emotions and things he wants to do but he doesn't. alternatively, he could be the kind who just does as he pleases because he believes this is how we should live our lives. or.. sometimes i wonder if he hides the former under an image of the latter..

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dejavu_love March 5 2012, 13:16:38 UTC

thank you! im so glad you liked it! =D

prettyinrags March 5 2012, 04:29:00 UTC

Lovely ! I liked the short sentences, the way the story goes. Nothing is really said but the butterfly metaphore gives it all and it just fits. The rooftop scene was great...I think anyone that drunk once to just feel...like Key here, can easily relate :3
You gained a new reader, will definitely check out your other stories <3

dejavu_love March 5 2012, 13:17:39 UTC

haha.. thank you!! im glad you liked it. i think i am tempted to do that sometimes. or maybe i already do that. hahaha..

and i hope you like the rest. =) concrit and comments in general will be appreciated! =)

saurio3o March 21 2012, 01:35:17 UTC

I just... I just love it ( ... )

dejavu_love March 21 2012, 03:52:15 UTC

sure!! I'm actually very honoured that you like it enough to want to translate it T_T feel free to do it! though.. do you mind linking me to the end product? I would really appreciate it! =)