story continued...

[dejayoubrandnew]

Three lunches, 2 dinner dates and a movie later I decided it was time to attempt to tell her how I felt again. This time I picked a spot that she couldn't possibly have a sappy sad story attached to it. I took her to the fair grounds near the junk-car heap. " Um hun what are we doing here?" She asked looking around the piles of scrap metal. I didn'

Comments

[x_hand_grenade]

its a pretty good story. but in reality no girl is that much of a sap. and if she knew he had to tell her sumin then she'd be all over it like any girl.

[dyingtocry]

actually... yea... some girls are that much of a sap... and she you can tell she definitely knows whats up... otherwise, she wouldn't keep bringing up all those sappy moments.

[x_hand_grenade]

oh shut the fuck up. maybe you are a sappy girl, thats why u concur.

[mike_q_gerson]

maybe you should just read the damn story and not criticize it. its a good story, it doenst matter how the girl would react to him having to tell her something, in this story she starts talking about old memories, when you write your own story you can have her jump on his news like mexicans on a borrito.

[dejayoubrandnew]

well thanks sam for saying it was pretty good... I know its not the greatest but thats what I get for writing on the top of my head.

Yes Erika some girls are saps like that lol. I dont know why I have her bring up all those memories yet....

And thank you mike for saying it was a good story and I love your ending line with the mexicans and borrito........ lol