Comments | dekdog11: song 13

dekdog11

song 13

Aug 29, 2006 17:03

the anchor that once kept us together at sea ( Read more... )

Comments 7

homegrizown August 29 2006, 22:12:57 UTC

your writing has really impressed me... it's really inspiring and obviously from reading this i can understand how u feel...

obviously feeling confused and lonely... it'll be ok writing helps and your good at it so never stop...

miss ya man go canes on monday

dekdog11 August 29 2006, 22:38:16 UTC

thanks dude, i really appreciate the feedback and that it is positive feedback is even more awesome.

and go canes is right...i can't wait for this...

4thqtrcomeback August 30 2006, 12:03:47 UTC

its good man.

I could see certain band references in there =)

like thursday

I think you could feed into that and the beat of the song could be similar to the morse code SOS sound

dekdog11 August 30 2006, 12:47:57 UTC

haha yea dude thursday is definitely the influence. and if i could make a beat, i would definitely think of what you said. and i don't believe that i write better than you, this is the first piece out of 13 that i am actually content with (the reason for me posting it). all of your work is consistent, thats what i need to work on.

4thqtrcomeback August 30 2006, 12:06:21 UTC

btw you write better than I

glisteningstars August 30 2006, 15:46:57 UTC

it still sounds really good from when I read it before when it was only a couple lines. Keep up the good work, and chin up.

dekdog11 August 30 2006, 20:38:32 UTC

thanks