Encounter - Chapter Twenty-Three

Jan 18, 2016 17:42

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The following day had gone by in a blur as Ennis busied himself with chores. Now he sat on the floor with his jeans-clad legs folded under him, the sun having set a few hours ago, using the television as his only source of light. He fought with the thin, snowman covered, red and gold wrapping paper, trying to stretch it over the oblong ( Read more... )

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gazapete January 19 2016, 08:12:49 UTC
So great to see you writing on this story again!

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Encounters of the great kind cwby30 January 21 2016, 04:29:28 UTC
Evenin'.

Well, glad to see another chapter in this story. I remembered it from a few years ago, and went back and re-read the whole thing. I like how you've woven the themes of OS and scenes in OS with today, and given Ennis the opportunity to find Jack when times have changed. He's still worried about what Alma and others will say and think. But he tells Jack he loves him, and won't quit him.

Hope you continue on.

Thanks again.

Bud

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