Encounter - Chapter Sixteen

[del_marvelous]

From Jack's Point of View...

Jack slung his gym bag over his right shoulder, pushed the back door to the jeep closed and walked quickly toward the entrance of Aguirre’s. Neil was already there as was Josh. He didn’t see Tim’s or Doug’s cars yet, so he must not have been as late as he originally thought.

Comments

[sweetje]

I love it! What started out as a hot dance just for Ennis, became a steamy dance between just the two of them, and ended in the most beautiful way it could ever end. I think that, admitting their love for each other, was the best part of this chapter.
I'm looking forward to the next update on this wonderful story. I love this story! : )
Debra

[torry28]

I love your Ennis, not afraid to show his tender heart and tell Jack he loves him. It hurt to have Jack shed tears but I guess it was like a relieve valve letting all his emotions trickle out, loving Ennis, being loved back. A mountain of emotions hope they will able to talk about all of it. I have to dig out my Jared DVD just so I can see what moves your Jack can produce to have Ennis melt like ice on a hotplate.
Great chapter, thank you. Hope you are feeling all right
Hugs,
Torry

[enoughtohurt]

You posted!!! YAYAYAY!!

I love this story, so so so much, really, and I keep wondering why the hell are you not posting at Brokebackslash. Everyone should read this, baby. It’s just awesome!!!

This was one of your best chapters till now. It was so freaking hot and then, at the end, so charged with sweetness and emotion. **melts**

I am gonna re read this again. I can’t get enough.

Thank you so much!!

Lots of love and hugs.

Tammy.

[jacks_key]

Oh YES! Love it!!! And you actually used the "c word", good for you! ;)

[smittenkitten45]

Aww I loved it! And I would give anything to see Jack stripping to Nine Inch Nails "Closer." That was awesome! I'm glad they have finally both said the "I love you's." Thanks for the great update!

Kelley