Wow, very powerful and very brilliant. It has many of the elemnets I usually dislike in a story, but your writing made me read on. It was heartbreaking and disturbing and amazingly written.
I absolutely loved this. Two Gods battling for eternity... or loving. Who knows. Humans are always changing..becoming. Maybe they will find a better way.
I've been writing disturbed/AU/far-out/futuristic "Heroes" stuff for a while now, and knowing what kind of stuff I've been planning... I think there's going to be more :)
Absolutely incredible. And inspirational! I just recced this on my LJ because it blew my mind. I printed it and read it as I was going to sleep, not expecting to get sucked in completely, and reading it while literally biting my knuckles.
"He's lonely." That just broke my heart in half. And the ending? EVIL! EVIL! And yet, where else can it go?
Can I just say that I want more of this? :) I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but hey, you can do whatever you want!
You know... my face is almost splitting in two right now :D You're one of my favorite writers in the fandom, so... getting recced AND commented by you is just about beyond awesome. *nods*
*coughs*
I've been surprised how much people have liked this fic. When I wrote it, I had this constant feeling that I was fucking up a perfectly good idea - not to mention making it too complicated for anyone to follow. Guess not...
Lol, I felt like submitting this to heroes-sandbox in case anyone wanted to make it in Sylar's POV, but... who knows, maybe I will write a sequel to it :S I'm a sucker for people asking me to do that, and you're not the first
Thank you again for reading and enjoying - and dropping me a line! Totally made my day (I think I'm suffering from post-fic!finishing stress... haven't written anything new since finshing this one... happens to me all the time, and I'm not all that certain if it's the simple case of writer's block *sighs*)
LMAO, on second thought... is that icon of yours supposed to intimidate me into writing a sequel? :P
It couldn't hurt! :D Everyone knows that it's best not to cross Mr. Muggles; he contains all the power in the universe, y'know. And no way in hell did you fuck up a good idea - no, you just opened Pandora's Box, and now you have to write some more of it. If there's any criticism of this story at all, it's the juicy, mind-itchy cliffhanger that makes me go "AAAAAAH! WHERE'S THE REST!?" Which... is not a criticism at all, but a whine! :)
I'm pleased that my opinion means so much (no really) - but really, I am always on the lookout for stellar fics because NEED MOAR STORY PLZ (and I have the habit of just relying on pornfics, and missing out on the other excellent work being done outside the smut realm). I just wish I could read more!
I blame you for ruining my evening walk with my dog: I was thinking of how to continue from the Cliffhanger of Doom. (not that it was really intended as one... really...)
Also, thanks for adding me back ^^ I can't believe I haven't added you before now *iz bad* And I really, really need to read your "Ritual" series - I started it from the middle way back since I, too, follow The Smut, and so I missed the beginning and all the delicious stuff there. *needs to read moar* LOL, that's what I get for being such a late bloomer in this fandom; all the good stuff has either gone by or started before I got here. :P
Yeah, I saved this to my computer the other day to read this weekend, because it was kind of long, and then it kept cropping up in recs and newsletters on my flist so I was compelled to sit down and read it. And damn, girl. You have literally built a WORLD here. I love how the story is told, in varying degrees of flashbacks, but it all melds together and isn't confusing. You actually made me LIKE Mohinder and when he died, I felt so horrible for Peter because you're right, it was the only kindness left in the world
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Where to start... First I guess I gotta thank all those people for reccing this poor fic? *nods* Oh yes.
Next I'll thank you for the lovely comment, and that you indeed read this one! Better “soon than later”, although “better late than never” also works for me just fine. As long as people are enjoying (or not, depending on the fic subject), I'm happy. That they let me know about their feelings is made of pure fantastic.
Also, I can't believe people haven't written more apocalyptic stuff for this fandom. It's practically begging for it. (not that I would know.... I'm just taking people's word for it: I'm too busy following a "smut" warning around to notice anything else *hangs head in shame*)
The fact that Peter would stay dead for years and years at a time is simultaneously daring and horrifying.I stole that idea from the show: since Adam stayed alive in his coffin for months and looked just fine when he punched his way out, I take it that Peter would also stay “well” if his body was left alone while he was dead... And if I'm
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Well that's really good XD 'Cause even I sometimes struggle through my own stories :P Guess that's what writers do, though... :D
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Indeed, it is hard to tell what Peter and Sylar are really feeling for each other from time to time - and they are as clueless as we are XD
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I've always been a sucker for larger than life,completely far-out futuristic,AU fics,and this is all of that!
I had a great time reading this,so thank you for writing it.Hope to see more of this sort of thing from you!
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I've been writing disturbed/AU/far-out/futuristic "Heroes" stuff for a while now, and knowing what kind of stuff I've been planning... I think there's going to be more :)
Thank you for reading and dropping me a line! ^^
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"He's lonely." That just broke my heart in half. And the ending? EVIL! EVIL! And yet, where else can it go?
Can I just say that I want more of this? :) I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but hey, you can do whatever you want!
Thank you. This is excellent.
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*coughs*
I've been surprised how much people have liked this fic. When I wrote it, I had this constant feeling that I was fucking up a perfectly good idea - not to mention making it too complicated for anyone to follow. Guess not...
Lol, I felt like submitting this to heroes-sandbox in case anyone wanted to make it in Sylar's POV, but... who knows, maybe I will write a sequel to it :S I'm a sucker for people asking me to do that, and you're not the first
Thank you again for reading and enjoying - and dropping me a line! Totally made my day (I think I'm suffering from post-fic!finishing stress... haven't written anything new since finshing this one... happens to me all the time, and I'm not all that certain if it's the simple case of writer's block *sighs*)
LMAO, on second thought... is that icon of yours supposed to intimidate me into writing a sequel? :P
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I'm pleased that my opinion means so much (no really) - but really, I am always on the lookout for stellar fics because NEED MOAR STORY PLZ (and I have the habit of just relying on pornfics, and missing out on the other excellent work being done outside the smut realm). I just wish I could read more!
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I blame you for ruining my evening walk with my dog: I was thinking of how to continue from the Cliffhanger of Doom. (not that it was really intended as one... really...)
Also, thanks for adding me back ^^ I can't believe I haven't added you before now *iz bad* And I really, really need to read your "Ritual" series - I started it from the middle way back since I, too, follow The Smut, and so I missed the beginning and all the delicious stuff there. *needs to read moar* LOL, that's what I get for being such a late bloomer in this fandom; all the good stuff has either gone by or started before I got here. :P
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Next I'll thank you for the lovely comment, and that you indeed read this one! Better “soon than later”, although “better late than never” also works for me just fine. As long as people are enjoying (or not, depending on the fic subject), I'm happy. That they let me know about their feelings is made of pure fantastic.
Also, I can't believe people haven't written more apocalyptic stuff for this fandom. It's practically begging for it. (not that I would know.... I'm just taking people's word for it: I'm too busy following a "smut" warning around to notice anything else *hangs head in shame*)
The fact that Peter would stay dead for years and years at a time is simultaneously daring and horrifying.I stole that idea from the show: since Adam stayed alive in his coffin for months and looked just fine when he punched his way out, I take it that Peter would also stay “well” if his body was left alone while he was dead... And if I'm ( ... )
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