Sounds

Jul 02, 2009 11:43

Story Info

Title: Sounds

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Future, post-Heroes

Genre: AU, angst, drama

Rating: T / FRT

Characters: Peter Petrelli, Sylar (, Arthur Petrelli)

Summary: Sylar is getting tired of the silence - among other things.
A companion piece to “ Deep Sleep”. Complete.

Written for: Heroes_Contest’ ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, character: sylar / gabriel gray, character: peter petrelli, series: broken world

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kirara3345 July 2 2009, 14:08:50 UTC
This story made me consider about what it's like for the beings like Sylar or Peter. In this story Sylar's situation was beyond imagination. Utter loneliness. Absolute solitude. Why on earth could Sylar carry on so long without going insane? Or thinking about Peter made him keep his sanity?

Your description about the sound of the metal spike sliding out of Peter's head was really beautiful. I love this part;

Sylar could hear him come back to life; his heart starting to beat, blood rushing through his veins, brain damage healing, and the scalp mending itself. Then came thoughts, and he knew Peter would soon be awake.

Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this exquisite piece of art with us. And congratulations for the 1st place for the "Release" challenge!

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del_rion July 2 2009, 14:31:28 UTC
Sylar's always been a little... erratic. But since he got almost half the country under his control, maybe it was worth a little silence and loneliness? Who knows why he really kept to himself... maybe he took up knitting or collecting rocks XD

Glad you liked the story. Hopefully it matched the feeling of "Deep Sleep" - and I hope that the sequel to these two, "Enemy Within", will also carry out the "legacy", so to speak.

And thank you! I kinda thought I might do well on "Release" if anyone bothered to vote... ;) But you never know about these things. *applauds for all the voters who cared to participate*

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rtwofan July 2 2009, 16:15:18 UTC
An awesome companion piece. It matched the tone of "Deep Sleep" perfectly. And I'm so excited for the sequel, that you mentioned in an above comment! This sandbox you've made is so fascinating, and I can't get enough.

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del_rion July 2 2009, 16:44:10 UTC
Oh, thank you ^^

I'm glad the two fics sounded alike, although the word count was slightly different.

I was actually thinking of first giving this idea for someone to grab at heroes-sandbox, but in the end I did it myself. Spared me the trouble of thinking about something else for the newest heroes-contest challenge ;P

Also, yes, I hope the sequel turns out okay. No idea when I actually sit down to write it since I think I ought to start working on my heroes-bigboom fic... It doesn't write itself, as much as I hope for it XD

Thank you for your comment! *squishes*

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eternal_moonie July 3 2009, 12:07:44 UTC
I totally love it!!!!

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del_rion July 3 2009, 12:36:08 UTC
Thanks ^^

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Well done. zagethe July 9 2009, 16:40:07 UTC
Deep Sleep was one of my faves. I only recently became a Heroes (and Sylar fan) so I've been looking for all the good FF I can find.

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Re: Well done. del_rion July 9 2009, 16:48:06 UTC
Glad you liked!

I feel like a late bloomer too... started watching Heroes when season 1 had already ended. I've been a Peter fan from the start. Sylar... well, he's cool enough :D

Hopefully you'll find good fics to read! There are many of those around in this fandom.

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del_rion November 28 2009, 11:06:01 UTC
I'm happy that you're happy XD
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, as always.

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