Finite in Infinite

[deleaah]

Finite in Infinite
Jessica-centric, Donghae/Jessica
PG-13 | Angst, Drama, Slice of Life | 7000w
Within four seconds of jumping, the jumpers hit the water at around 75 mph or approximately 120 km/h.
Warning: AU!Donghae/Jessica

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Comments

[paradigm_twist]

I don't usually read crossovers that much but the title intrigued me. I'm glad I did though. This is really good. The development of the story and the parallels drawn between small decisions (like drinking coffee) and life's big picture is really good.

Especially the part about death and suicide. That's actually quite an interesting comparison. And experiment. Even if she really wanted to do it but didn't in the end > >

All in all, great read ^^ Glad I took a chance and found a gem :)

Thanks for sharing!

[deleaah]

Aww, your comment's so sweet ^^ I feel honoured having this story being called a gem :3 Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :)

[daisukissu]

OMG ;_____; this is so beautiful! Your masterpiece, I should say. And I love the ending! You make me cry in happiness!!

ps. I squealed in real life XDD

[deleaah]

Thank you for commenting and calling it a masterpiece! :)

ps. I hope no one was around when you were squealing, I wouldn't want people to think you were crazy ;__;

[daisukissu]

nah~ no one was around when i squealed. and if ever there were, i wouldnt mind them thinking i was crazy. cos i am. i am crazy for this story!! i even shared it to my haesica friends!! hihi~

this is truly just wonderful! thank you for writing such a beautiful story for one of my OTPs! <3

[ittiban]

♥ /loves this a lot.
The symbolism and personalities were really good & the last line was adorable ;___; I wish I could write this well c:

[deleaah]

Thanks for the love ♥

I guess English class comes in with all the lessons about rhetorical devices ~
Don't worry, when you write more and more, your writing will slowly bloom into a beautiful flower ^^

[purplepedro]

I absolutely loved it. I actually didn't want to end. You covered a lot of things, not just romance, and I think that's what gave your story an extra spark. Beautiful, just beautiful. ♥
Wonderful last line, btw. I wish I could read that book.

[deleaah]

Thanks for the comment! It made me smile while reading it! :)
LOL, the book is basically the story, a story within a story. inception!

[minmib]

It so good and i love it <3
I like your fic's ending :x

[deleaah]

thanks for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^