Jonquil 3/3

Jun 07, 2008 00:17


Jonquil (3/3)

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jonquil, pete/patrick, brendon/ryan, jon/spencer, tom/greta

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ivesia19 June 7 2008, 18:39:04 UTC
There are so many amazing things about this story I just don't know where to start.
I love the whole flower idea, it really brought a deeper meaning to everything and at times my heart actually jumped up because of something you wrote or just a simple image.
It was so great:
The simple perfection of Ryan and Brendon and their family
The slow acceptance and realization of Spencer with his mother and the town
Jon, Jon was wonderful

I know that I'll be reading this over again and again, I can tell that this is one of those stories that I'll get more out of with each read through.

P.S. I'm totally writing on a dollar now :D

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delete_entry June 7 2008, 22:57:13 UTC
Apparently, I really like flowers. And killing Spencer's mother. I'm sensing a writing motif :O Thank you!

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heyhokelso June 7 2008, 20:46:45 UTC
oh. my god.
-goes to write on a dollar bill-
This was so sweet, so heart-breakingly sweet, and the flower guide was really, really helpful!
I think I'm going to go outside now. =D
<333

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delete_entry June 7 2008, 22:57:32 UTC
I'm a big fan of writing on dollar bills, not going to lie.

Thank you! <3

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halighanawfulie June 7 2008, 21:08:33 UTC
This was so amazing. Im crying right now, ok?!
It was so beautiful, so so beautiful.
I loved the concept. I love the flowers and the meanings.I love the idea. I love the fact that Jon was in love with Spencer without even really knowing him. I loved everything. It was so simple, yet so touching.
Thank you for writing something like this and for sharing it with all of us.
Thank you.

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delete_entry June 7 2008, 22:58:01 UTC
Fight Club FTW.

You're very welcome! Thank you for all your kind words. :]

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halighanawfulie June 7 2008, 23:15:58 UTC
lol Fight Club is always ftw :D

You're welcome, i really loved the story :)

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delete_entry June 7 2008, 22:59:13 UTC
Um, I may or may not already be writing a sequel >.> Mostly because I want to live/roll around in this universe forever and ever.

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halighanawfulie June 7 2008, 23:20:47 UTC
I have to say that I completly agree with every single word. :)

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killerfer June 7 2008, 21:33:01 UTC
I totally loved this. It made me cry of joy. Unique story, the flower thing is amazingly sweet and oh god...I'm melting because of Jon and Spencer.
Ryan and Brendon are adorable (so are their children) but Jon and Spencer are just incredible. I love the 'I Love Spencer Smith' on the dollar.
Congratulations for this amazing story! I'm going to read it over and over again for sure

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delete_entry June 7 2008, 22:59:56 UTC
flowers ftw is forever my motto. thank you! <3

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