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Supernatural Fic

Jul 07, 2007 19:23

Title: The Magic Knife
Author: dragon_baby19
Characters: The Winchester Boys
Rating: PG
Word Count: 793
Summary: Sam's fears are put at ease by Dean a little knife.
Disclaimer: I merely play with them for fun. Kripke is the genius behind this stuff.
Notes: This is part of a meme from impalalove. Didn't think I'd end up doing it, but I did and I actually ended up doing a ( Read more... )

sam-centric, supernatural fic, wee!chesters, fanfiction, supernatural, general

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riotact July 8 2007, 03:06:32 UTC

Thank you! :D Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I thought the idea of Dean giving Sam something was cute. Dean's a marshmallow. :p

mariana_oconnor July 12 2007, 13:46:00 UTC

Aww... of course Dean would keep it. Loved the tone of the pice. Just the right amount of exasperation in both boys when the other is being unmanageable. Really cute, but still with the brotherly banter. Great!

riotact July 14 2007, 01:12:52 UTC

Thank you. :D

bleu_eyed_ace July 12 2007, 14:06:08 UTC

Yay! x1390875298746246!

♥

denisitap July 12 2007, 16:00:32 UTC

Cute =)

riotact July 14 2007, 01:13:51 UTC

Thanks. :)

(Icon love!)

ex_rosegany July 12 2007, 16:28:52 UTC

I love wee!chesters, and this was great. Poor Sammy - with his life and all he's seen from such a young age, no wonder he's probably scared of so many things! And, well, that's just kids for ya too, and Sam is a sensitive soul...

And Dean takin' care of him, as always. So sweet.

I love how you wrote this - I felt like you had the voices and personalities down, and just bits and pieces here and there really worked...

Sam, who was still not attuned to the difference between sternness and anger, began to cry. Wailing, Sam ran into the bedroom that he and Dean shared. Throwing himself on his bed and burying his head under his pillow Sam cried, the sad, lonely cry of a boy who thought he was in trouble.

I was always like that as a kid (still am a bit), so I really liked this touch - so real.

When Sam had left for college he left the knife, forgetting it in his anger and wanting so badly to call Dean or his father to send it. He never did, though, and so lost hope of ever seeing it again. He'd always figured they'd sell it for ammo ( ... )

riotact July 14 2007, 01:16:02 UTC

You're too nice. :p But thank you, you made my day.

Poor Sammy, and then he calls Dean sentimental for keeping it?!
Yay! You picked up on that, that's my favourite part.

Thanks again, doll.