Comments | delilah_joy: Fic: The Night Before (David Cook/David Archuleta)

delilah_joy

Fic: The Night Before (David Cook/David Archuleta)

Jan 01, 2010 22:16

Title: The Night Before
Author: delilah_joy
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: American Idol RPF
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Length: 2400 words
Warning: MPreg. But I've been told it's a good mpreg story for readers who usually don't like mpreg. :)
A/N: Written for the AI Holiday Bash.

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slash, american idol, cook/archuleta, fic

Comments 39

mitchiemarie January 2 2010, 04:12:47 UTC

-squeeeeeeee!!!!!!-
I love archie being all fatherly even if it feels pretty.odd (xD) that cook's
pregnant and not
archie...
but I still really really adored this!!
:D

delilah_joy January 2 2010, 18:18:33 UTC

Thanks! When I started writing, my first thought was that it would be Archie who was pregnant, and then I thought, "Well, why am I making that assumption?" And it kind of came together after that.

janedavitt January 2 2010, 04:15:18 UTC

Just a friendly heads up: You might want to cut as it's long and NC17 :-)

delilah_joy January 2 2010, 18:18:59 UTC

Thank you!

wicked_music January 2 2010, 04:17:17 UTC

Whoever told you that this was awesome...

WAS DEFINITELY SAYING THE TRUTH!

I'm don't really read mpreg, but bb, this was good.

Like, like crazy good.

<3

delilah_joy January 2 2010, 18:19:18 UTC

Hee--glad you liked it!!!

asweetdownfall January 2 2010, 04:54:34 UTC

Awwww that was so adorable!

And you should totally write a sequel. Ahem. :)

delilah_joy January 2 2010, 18:19:44 UTC

Thanks! I hadn't been planning on it, but I'll definitely give it some thought. :-)

cerrad January 2 2010, 04:56:35 UTC

Well, whoever told you that was right. This is really interesting. I like how you've grounded it in some sense of reality. I can remember seeing stories (even if they were parodied on Colbert) about a possible future that includes male pregnancies and I like how you've used that sense, rather than just creating this whole nebulous world where everyone can get pregnant and isn't it fantastic, etc. Nice tough about the tabloids, btw. :D

I also like how it was a practical medical decision that decided who was going to carry the baby. They're both guys, I doubt either of them would be clamoring to be pregnant, so this rang real for me.

I love your Cook as well. :-) I just looked at the other comments. Sorry about the length, I guess I'm feeling wordy tonight?

cerrad January 2 2010, 04:57:12 UTC

That was supposed to be "nice touch" not "tough". Ugh.

delilah_joy January 2 2010, 18:21:42 UTC

LOL--I hate the way you can't edit comments when you make a mistake. Thanks for reading and for writing such a lovely, long comment. I never thought I'd write mpreg, but the gift recipient requested it, and it seemed like it would be an interesting challenge to see if I could make it reasonably "realistic," while still keeping them in the universe we live in. I'm glad you liked it!