Tales of the Girl that Might Have Been(6)

[dell1190]

Somewhere down deep in here heart she remembered a time, a place, a person, who loved her before she was special. Someone she had not thought of in years. A tear slid slowly down her cheek as she looked down at her hands covered in blood, her blood.

She looked back up at the man standing before her in all his furry and rage. Dell fell to her knees

Comments

[anonymous]

I have no words. Very well written, and I look forward to seeing where this all goes.

ooppsss

[rivetgoat]

THis is Del, btw

[uveron]

Nice..
A wonderful closing to a wonderful story

Dell

[hansmwatson]

I really enjoyed this story of Dell and could feel the sense of child like glee mixed with terrifying power that would be afforded by mind mastery.

I was sad to see her pass at the end of this one but look forward to seeing future entries.

[eyes_of_wild]

*Snickers* Ah i knew we taught you well

[solice247]

The writing was absolutly beautiful. Definitly had a feeling of one who let the idea of Hubris rule them and such. I definitly looked foreward to reading each installment