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Clu/Rinzler Go Ahead Cry

Feb 13, 2011 20:11

Title: Go Ahead, Cry
Pairing: Clu/Rinzler
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Clu takes a bubble bath. Rinzler joins him. Written for this prompt at tronkinkmeme
Warning: Seriously, dorky smut, which somehow turns into violence. BDSM.
Ok so this is a little sillier than I usually write but I thought they were just so cute together I had to go for it . Then it got ( Read more... )

Comments 9

grey_sw February 14 2011, 06:11:59 UTC

ha, this is cute. Nice to see these two let loose and have a little fun (even if beating the crap out of each other is their idea of "fun"!), and Rinzler's "dream" was a sweet surprise.

I love the idea that Clu stuck the rubber duckie on his pillow. <3

delphix_sible February 14 2011, 06:20:37 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked it. I'm not really sure how or why they ended up smacking each other around so much. It just sort of happened. I figured that with their relationship being the way it is that it could happen XD

grey_sw February 14 2011, 06:36:42 UTC

They both seem well-nigh indestructible in the movie, anyway, so why not? It's like hair-pulling, only... more so. :P

zombie_pigeon February 14 2011, 08:42:13 UTC

Straightening up he leaned quickly towards Rinzler, knocking the rubber ducky to the side.

*giggle* :D

delphix_sible February 14 2011, 08:47:51 UTC

Hehe OP said I would get bonus points for the ducky!

asis_w February 14 2011, 13:49:05 UTC

oooohhhhmygawd haha what a great way to start another day of university classes! This fic already made my day, honestly. It was just the perfect combination of dark and fluff! Oh GAWD I just can't get over how perfect it was! I loved the rubber ducky XD XD <3333 amazing job!

delphix_sible February 14 2011, 16:33:03 UTC

Yayy!! I'm glad it made your day! Now you have something to think about when class gets too boring ;)

magenter March 19 2011, 18:40:05 UTC

At first I was like "...not sure if want?" but... this was awesome, and surprisingly cute amongst the darkness and weirdness. I LOLed at Rinzler and the rubber ducky on top of his mountain of bubbles XD And sleepy Rinzler's dreaming was really cute and kind of sad at the same time. Very nice!

delphix_sible March 19 2011, 21:59:57 UTC

So glad you enjoyed it ^^ Sometimes it just flows and I don't know where the weirdness comes from XD But then there's plenty of fluff sprinkled in there.

Thanks for reading :)