you can call me MC Scottypottamuss

Aug 17, 2004 23:59

So I spent the night at Ben's house friday and at like 2:30 in the morning or so I was feeling restless so I picked up my pen and pad and wrote a little jig ( Read more... )

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1point61803399 August 17 2004, 21:58:28 UTC
as i read it i was thinking to myself " these would be really good lyrics for a song" apparently you thought so to. were you on anything? not in a bad way it flows really well " souljahs " eeeeexcelent word.
the thin line that lies
between beauty and splendor
i like a lot

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deluged August 18 2004, 15:19:55 UTC
well technically i wrote most of it last night. heres what it originally was on paper ( ... )

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snowwhite23 August 24 2004, 18:39:54 UTC
Reborn against the lines
inside the setting or rising tides
i sink beside a sphere of time
encompassed inside the rhymes

i'm particularly attracted to this part...although the whole thing is good. and yeah-i would love to hear this as a rap...

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deluged August 31 2004, 18:33:33 UTC
its on my to-do list

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