So I spent the night at Ben's house friday and at like 2:30 in the morning or so I was feeling restless so I picked up my pen and pad and wrote a little jig
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as i read it i was thinking to myself " these would be really good lyrics for a song" apparently you thought so to. were you on anything? not in a bad way it flows really well " souljahs " eeeeexcelent word. the thin line that lies between beauty and splendor i like a lot
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the thin line that lies
between beauty and splendor
i like a lot
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inside the setting or rising tides
i sink beside a sphere of time
encompassed inside the rhymes
i'm particularly attracted to this part...although the whole thing is good. and yeah-i would love to hear this as a rap...
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