Pale Tortured Blue 1/? | Uruha/Aoi | NC-17

Jan 22, 2016 16:35

pale tortured blue - 1/? (sequel to narcissistic cannibal)

beta: ravennightmare6

au, drama, angst | nc-17
pairing: uruha/aoi, uruha/ruki (past), ruki/?, kazuki/aoi (one-sided)
warning: mxm relationships, sensitive issues, clingy!kazuki lmao
disclaimer: i own nothing except for the plot. “pale tortured blue” is the title of a song owned by the swedish band ( Read more... )

nc-17, uruhaxaoi

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luvthe_gazette January 22 2016, 20:41:04 UTC
asdfghjkl I can't believe you're writing a sequel!!! I'm so excited!!!! I feel so sorry for Yuu, it's like his worst nightmare coming to life o.o His past is chasing like there's no tomorrow... Poor dude, I hope he's ok :/

(wtf first comment? I haven't made the first comment in a fic in years o.o)

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delusive_doll January 22 2016, 21:08:07 UTC
If i don't write a sequel, who else is gonna torture aoi? :'D haha just kidding, i can't really just leave the end with nc, the story isn't finished until both yuu and kou have closure ;)

Lol that's because you're the only person reading it ^____^ /opens fanfares/

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luvthe_gazette January 22 2016, 21:19:00 UTC
asdfghjkl I want them to be together so much but I want everything to slowly fall in place, not rushed things. I was really grateful for the way you ended NC actually. I'd be very unrealistic (in my opinion at least) if Yuu and Kouyou got together just like that and Takanori never knew or even worse he accepted it. I'm so looking forward to what's going to become next :D Has Kouyou moved on? Did Taka forgive his brother in those 11 years? Is Akira still an asshole? I'm pretty sure he is bth I want to knooooow o(>.<)o

Nooooo, I'm sure other people will read it too!!! D: NC was such a good story it deserves a happy ending!!!

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delusive_doll January 23 2016, 09:42:45 UTC
Hehe thank you for supporting the end of nc :)) i guess, i'd love them to be together asap too, but love isn't a gift and they have to work for it! You'll get all yours answer soon ~~

Lol thank you for your kind words, but people are losing interest in it and i can see it xD

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viciousfaye69 January 23 2016, 08:31:53 UTC

OMG I'm freaking the fuck out! Not only has it been 11 years and Yuu is now a nurse but he and yutaka are co-workers and friend but now Taka,Akira, and Kouyou show up out of the blue!!!!  I would have lost it!! I'm loving the way this sorry is going! I hope you update soon!

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delusive_doll January 23 2016, 09:43:00 UTC
Thank you love <3

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lotos79 January 23 2016, 10:19:07 UTC
omg, I love this!! Yuu as a nurse~ perfect job for his caring personality. I'm proud that he had chosen such a career for himself.
But that evening is surely a nightmare. All that drama and uncertainty ahead. This is not only about the past catching up to him, but also about the future of his employment. Akira and Takanori could kick him out based on personal vengeance.
I'm not sure if I even want to do this to myself... But I love Yuu-centered stories, so why the hell not. :D

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lotos79 January 23 2016, 10:20:43 UTC
oh, and the title makes so much sense now. I should have drawn the connection right away. *facepalm*

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delusive_doll January 23 2016, 11:18:52 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting <3

Haha, yes, Yuu is always caught up in so much drama :D I guess reading this may evoke bouts of sadism in you xD

And yes ~~ thank you for noticing the title, when I heard the song I thought that it 100% suited the fic lol

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lotos79 January 24 2016, 14:08:04 UTC
I feel sorry for Yuu. He's going through so many hardships, and no one around him can actually grasp the selflessness he is carrying out over and over again.
I really wish that Kouyou will cut the crap, come to his senses and shower Yuu with the love and respect he truly deserves! He can still be a caring dominant. *shrugs* Alas, I know there's still a looo~ng way to go for them.

The song fits, not only the title (which itself is, btw, a great analogy in this case), but also the lyrics, the music and Heike's voice. I like it. ^^
Thanks for pointing out this band, I wasn't aware about them before but now I actually consider buying Sovran. I like the album from what I have listened to so far.

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anonymous January 25 2016, 14:47:00 UTC
I really love how you write and this--this is beautiful *^* I had to stop what I'm doing just to read this xD
And Yuu surely is shocked by this grand reunion--poor baby don't hurt him too much xD And Taka--pls.. *^* I fear for what's going to happen when he sees his brother xD

(first time to comment--but your stories caught my attention and I love them so :3)

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delusive_doll January 25 2016, 15:00:36 UTC
Aww thanks so much for your kind words :) their reunion will surely be a dramatic one lol

(ありがとうございます again ♡)

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vampire_kiki January 25 2016, 15:34:37 UTC
OMG you have me hooked.

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