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Broken Hearts and Silver Tears CH 15

Apr 15, 2009 17:42

Title: Broken Hearts and Silver Tears Ch15
Pairing: Demi/Selena
Rating: M for language, violence?, kissing? Safety precaution...
Summary: How Demi would carry on if the whole Selena/Nick rumor was true.
A/N: THE PENULTIMATE CHAPTER....err, unless I decide to do two more chapters which is not very likely lol. I wrote this chapter on paper first...I don ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

alice991 April 16 2009, 22:03:35 UTC

Dr. Dre, this story is so amazing as hell, I'd hate to see it finish.

I loved the little dashes of comic relief in this chapter (Demi and the 'let me go get my guitar' and Dallas at the end).

I would love the next chapter to be about the ground rules the parents are going to set up. I think it'd be hilarious.

And don't say this chapter was sucky, sweets. It was great. :)

loveistragical April 16 2009, 23:23:58 UTC

That was so adorable. Thank you for dedicating it to me. This is my favorite chapter thus far. I like that you took a different route because honestly, I think maybe their parents might actually react that way. They are SO obvious and their parents love them so much, I just can't see it any other way. <3 (Even though I wrote it the other way for angst)

Sorry I wasn't feeling so expressive the other day. I am making up for it RIGHT NOW.

"Ha! I was right! You owe me a twenty and a Churro!"
^ That made me laugh so hard..THEY WERE TAKING BETS? Hahahaha just so much cuteness I could hardly contain myself.

Nick really redeemed himself for me (lol at Demi calling him Curly) and I do understand where he was coming from. It would be hard to hear something like that especially since he really did love Selena...The beginning of the chapter with all the kisses and such, you write love SO well..I can tell you just have so much love in you when you write. You're a great writer. <3

ex_alittlel April 19 2009, 11:29:43 UTC

dude, ive found out about this fic and i just love it.
ive read it in like, a day.

coffeecommunity April 30 2009, 23:10:47 UTC

So I had this nagging feeling in the back of my mind, and sure enough, I double-checked and saw that I missed reviewing this before. I've been having issues like you wouldn't believe. Anyway...sorry about that. On to fic!

I really love the ten minute countdown intervals. It's very appropriate to their frame of mind and only continues the sense of foreboding. The way they just sit in silence is absolutely beautiful. The exchange with Nick...I really like that he redeemed himself and that he even acknowledges that he should have seen this coming. "Yeah, we're cool. I won't get my guitar." The first sign you act like a prick or look at my girl funny, that changes Curly. So freaking hilarious! But Demi's willing to forgive for Selena, and that's huge. I love that Demi can see somewhat in her mother's eyes that this isn't gonna be such a shock...that they're not so oblivious after all. Demi trying to help Selena explain and then Selena's the one that finally lays it all out on the line is so adorably sad. I love how their parents echo ( ... )

jamroc May 15 2009, 08:56:18 UTC

OMG even Madison knew! haha

'Looking at his watch, Nick started mitioning back to his car. "Well, it's 8:30." I should probably head back.'
Bedtime, Nick? You're lucky I don't hate you as much now...

'Guess I'll be the one doing the most talking. Greeeat.'
=D ily!

I'm glad their parents reacted like that. If Nick noticed it, their family should realize also.

It's an amazing ch. Definitely not sucky. Guuuuurl, watchu talkin' bout?

But... Final Chapter?!?! WUT?! This.is.an.OUTRAGE!!!!!!