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[demireps]

before hands kept pushing me down, shoving me down. i called them clammy hands, moist and disgusting. now they appear soft, smooth, so i reached out for them. as i reached i mouthed words, take me, please. i woke up in the backseat of a car, it smelled of old clothes and photographs were sprawled all over the ground. photographs of your girlfriend

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[whencarscrash]

you should write a book

[demireps]

"a collection of stories that will make you want to vomit all over yourself"
haha

[whencarscrash]

uh, maybe in a good way. like a vomit of love. yes, a very warm vomit of love pouring from your mouth and brain and heart because the things you write are beautiful.

[whatstory]

i agree.

[melancholydahl]

...my hair decorating the white pillow.

i love that.

i love it all, really.

[sharkattack]

lizzie, you are a wonderful writer. stop putting your words down, you are much more talented than i am.