Blackbird - chapter 2

Mar 31, 2011 15:57



“I’m sorry, do we know each other?”

(edited: 11-4-11)
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harry potter, slash, dark hunter, fanfiction writings, harry/nick, fanfiction

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demon_sloth April 1 2011, 15:20:40 UTC
No! Please do continue! Honest, I fail at angst - really, but you were right about the chapter feeling a bit rushed and I had thought to add on another scene at the end with Nick and Hermione and then Hermione and Harry.

Your suggestion for the start makes a lot of sense - I think I'm gonna rework the beginning to incoporate some of your ideas as I've been trying too hard to stick to a drabble fic.

(It is so not going to be a drabble fic at all...)

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demon_sloth April 10 2011, 23:29:51 UTC
I edited it - hopefully it's more developy in the angst department :/

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