Fic: Innocence

[demonllama1]

Title: Innocence (one-shot)
Universe: XI
Rating: PG
Relationship status: established relationship
Word count: 4950
Genre: fluff, angst
Trope: kid fic
Warning: Fluff and angst.
A/N: In response to this meme prompt.
Summary: On a rescue mission, Jim finds a Vulcan orphan who becomes extremely affectionate and possessive of him, leading to problems.

Comments

[omendreamer]

Awww, Daddy!Jim is enough to make MY biological clock go into overtime. And I totally sympathize with Sovick, since if I were a 4 year-old Vulcan I would totally try and claim Jim for myself. He's that awesome, it's just irresistible.

[demonllama1]

Haha, if only Jim Kirk could be cloned. That's the dream. ;) Thank you for reading!

[lemon_drop151]

Awesome! It's pleading for a sequel.

Poor Sovik. *pets*

[demonllama1]

I actually almost added a little epilogue type bit with Sovick meeting Jim and Spock's own child but I decided to at least try and rein in the fluff to some level, haha. :) Thanks for reading my love.

[lemon_drop151]

Nooooooooooooooo!!!! You must add it!!!!!!!!

Pleeeeeeeeeeasssssssssseeeeeeeeee!

[demonllama1]

I can't promise anything but if I do edit the entry and add it, I will let you know my darling. :)

[pegasus_01]

WAAAH!!! CUUUUTE!!! Can we have a sequel where Jim and Spock end up adopting?! Because now Jim's biological clock is ticking and he wants a kid (and I love kiddie fics...) :)

[demonllama1]

I did almost add an epilogue bit where Sovick meets Jim and Spock's adopted kid in the future but I decided against it. I adore writing kid!fic so I may do something in the future. :) Thanks for reading!

[pegasus_01]

YAAAAAY!!!! \o/!!!
Jim would make such an awesome dad! And he'd be the "nice parent" who can't say no and Spock would be looming over his shoulder glaring at him and the kid and being all 'No, he may not have the candy, it is past his bed times and he has already brushed his teeth.' and then Jim and little kid would look at Spock with puppy dog eyes and Spock would just huff and go all 'See if I care when you get cavities' and storm off :-)

Wow, I can't believe I rambled on about that... I think I should stop drinking so much coffee in the morning...

[demonllama1]

Haha, I love that idea. I already have Soren-verse which is of course based around Jim and Spock's kid (through mpreg), but I'm not against doing an adopted!kid fic because it would be cute. Ooo, so many ideas and so little time. :)

[demonllama1]

Haha, I know, the kid is cute but dangerous. :) Thanks for reading.

[downshefalls]

I am far too young to have my biological clock ticking, but this definitely did it.

You did a wonderful job of illustrating how severe the situation was, to the point where I could almost feel Jim's discomfort, Spock's protectiveness, and Sovik's pain.

Absolutely wonderful.

[demonllama1]

Haha, even when I'm 40, I'll still consider myself too young to have kids. ;) Thanks for reading!