Invisible [Part 2]

Jan 02, 2012 11:28

Title: Invisible
Pairing: Main!Kyusung, Side!Kyumin, Eventual!Minwook
Genre: Romance, Angst, Drama, Minor!Fluff
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I wish I own them but I don't.
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pairing: minwook, genre: angst, genre: drama, genre: romance, pairing: kyusung, story: invisible, fic: one-shot, rating: g

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denden143 January 2 2012, 03:37:53 UTC
SPOT for rhenny and sungieobsessed Hope you like it :D

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rhenny January 3 2012, 16:44:47 UTC
ASDFGHJKL Thank you Aunt Den!!!
I'm starting to think that I don't deserve all the love I'm receiving....
I'm really thankful to all of you!!

still spazzing after reading this the second time around!!
the internet here is a major fail... so now here is my comment....

WAH!!! I'm pretty glad that I was online when you are writing this....
*I did all the things I can do to have a happy ending!!!!! *
Yes this is really less depressing!!! *sighs in relief!*
Sequel! Sequel!

Poor Yesung and Kyu!!! They have been suffering because of their feelings... but I don't blame Min and Wook.... *MinWook bias here* because they really love each other!! *a really biased shipper here*

Wah!!! I cried while reading the rain scene....
I understand and know archetypes so that made it more dramatic... and a little psychological since rain means rebirth... so yeah...
wait.... do you know what happened to me yesterday when I was reading this?
something like...let me be dramatic for a moment... ( ≧Д≦) 。゜
and then tears flooded 。・゚゚・(>д<;)・゚゚ ( ... )

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denden143 January 4 2012, 06:27:58 UTC
You deserve it Rhen,,you're welcome!! I hope you like my present,,sorry if I didn't make it on your actual birthday :D

You ruined the story...LMAO!! jkjk,,but this was actually supposed to have an angst ending, full of sadness, pain and regrets...but because of you I have to improvise and it became a fluff that is hurl worthy..xDDD!!

Minwook is <3!!

Im sorry it made you cry,,,I really drag that one out huh :D Didn't expect for it to be like so heartbreaking like that :(( But LOL at your mood swings!! xDDD!!

Awww!! Auntie don't want to break your heart so I especially made that ending for you :D (You ruined my reputation for always creating an angst ending >.<)

Kyusung bias much..xDD!! Kyu will take care of Jongwoon this time around...and a sequel?? Maybe someday :D

I spent a long time searching for all those quotes...Im glad you like them :D

I love you more...Im so happy you like it...LOL!! That was already in my past,,Im already okay now :D
Hwaiting also Rhen!!

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sungieobsessed January 4 2012, 17:09:58 UTC
I will reply here too, since part if this fic is mine (>):D (mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine, mine ... (a) )
though guess my part would be part 1, since Rhen's the reason the fic got a happy ending? *-* ... XD
but ...
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WAE SO SAD?! ;AAAAAA; feel so bad for everyone, but mostly Yesung (then Kyuhyun, Sungmin and Ryeowook xD) ㅜ.ㅜ
I've never been in love, so I can't really relate, but at the same time, I totally understand xD >.< (I think? xD (a ( ... )

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turtleclouds January 2 2012, 04:12:31 UTC
SPOT.
BRB reading now :P

Belated Happy New Year bb x)

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turtleclouds January 2 2012, 04:33:32 UTC
Aww I'm glad Rhen made you make it a happy ending :) It was very sweet <3

It's sad that you can relate to the feelings so well, but I think you depicted them perfectly, which made the fic even better. I can't say I can relate to the situation 100%, but my heart ached for Jongwoon in this :( I'm so glad they got together (and Kyuhyun finally realized that Jongwoon is THE ONE). Lots of love for the fluffy ending x)

Oh Jongwoon, he really can't hold in his "I love you" declarations. I guess he just sucks at playing hard to get eh? :P

And on another note: I LOVE MINWOOK. So glad you made them a couple hehe ^^

I absolutely love this one from you! <3 You amazing girl. I always look forward to your updates heh.
May you write even more in 2012 :D
And may 2012 be even better than 2011 :)

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denden143 January 4 2012, 06:32:41 UTC
Rhen ruined my reputation for always making an angst ending with this fic...xDDD!! But Im glad you like it,,it makes me hurl actuallu..too fluffy for my liking >.<

That was really a sad experience but it taught me a lot of things..Im okay with it now~ Its a hurl worthy ending but Im glad you love my first try in fluff :D

Jongwoon is too eager yes...xDDD!! He's so easy :)

Minwook is ♥...I love that pairing :D

Awwww!! Thank you,,,i really poured all my emotions on this fic,,Im happy it turned out quite good..thanks for always looking forward to my works,,,i always look forward to yours too!! :D

Let's write more this 2012!!

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a9sims January 2 2012, 04:30:12 UTC
Kyuhyun sure took a long time to recover but yay, the long wait was totally worth it. I'm so glad things have turned out well for them both. Thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful story! I enjoyed this very much!

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denden143 January 4 2012, 06:33:54 UTC
Yeah I agree...the result was worth the wait :D

Im happy you enjoyed this story,,,thanks for reading and commenting!! :D

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evilmind28 January 2 2012, 05:17:23 UTC
Make a spot first read later at home

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evilmind28 January 2 2012, 12:56:38 UTC
Yess..that the longest fic u ever wrote and it's so beautifully perfect. So worthy to be read n made me crying *sobs* while read this.

Love angst with happy ending. Love the last part where jongwoon n kyu meet again..ohh,i'm so happy. The tears they poured for each other was the bestest scene here..it made me cried too *sobs again*.

This story is just *speechless*..full of emotion. It's like i can feel what yesung feel. The way u wrote both jongwoon's n kyu's feel was so great n so deep. U wrote it so perfectly,every words u put is full of meaning not to mention felt so real like in a real life.

I can't say anything more about this i'm just too amazed with this fic of urs. LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I LOVE YOU MORE *kiss n hugs*

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denden143 January 4 2012, 06:37:44 UTC
This is so looooooooooooong!!! :D Awwww!! It's not perfect,,but Im happy you think so :D Im sorry it made you cry though T.T Sometimes I hate myself for writing so much sad stories :((

Angst with a happy ending,,this is my first time doing this,,im not comfortable with happy ending xDDD!!

Really?? That's my intention...if Jongwoon's feelings reach you, then my mission was accomplished :D I tried to make it more meaningful and full of lesson :D

I love you more unnie...thanks for giving this fic so much love! :D

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MINE! amanda_clarissa January 2 2012, 06:18:16 UTC
^_^

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Re: MINE! denden143 January 4 2012, 06:38:03 UTC
All yours bb!! ♥

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