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amor_demi_alma August 27 2009, 07:49:12 UTC
Sooo good! Can't wait to read the next part. Your word choice is amazing! Ditto imagery and character development.

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soda_and_capes August 27 2009, 12:24:21 UTC
I am a very dangerous thing: an irrational and vindicated adolescent.
Ohgod, this. Completely fucking brilliant.

with upside down cone rights instead of cylinders.
Fuck, man, you really have a way with words.

make even my liver sparkle.
Holy shiiiiit, so good.

Perhaps the enemy is an untouchable smell, or a way of looking at faces.
Christ, this is fucking amazing.

So, yeah, basically this is completely beautiful and I adore it.

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