Allies Alphabet Soup: L is for Loss

[dennydj]

Title: L is for Loss
Summary: Even in the midst of great loss, there is hope. Takes place during the episode Last Stand
Written for the Allies Alphabet Soup.

L is for Loss
“You can’t heal me, can you?”

“I am still trying, Elliot.”

“It’s taking all of your strength just to keep me breathing.”

“If I can keep you alive until Selmac and Doctor

Comments

[gategremlyn]

Beautiful stuff, Denny!

[dennydj]

Thanks! I appreciate your help whipping it into shape, too. :-)

[eilidh17]

A great little scene. And I can hear their voices playing this out perfectly.

Well done on your first soup, Denny (I knew you could do it) XX

[dennydj]

Thanks for your help with it, and for the cheerleading! :-)

[dennydj]

Thanks! Yeah, I always hated it that it was Elliot's first (and last) mission.

[chattycatsmeow]

I really like this glimpse of the internal debates that must go on between the Tok'ra and their hosts. Well done!

[dennydj]

Thanks! I was hoping the 'converstaion' was clear. There would have been plenty of time for the two of them to converse during the trek to the sensor; this was my take on it.

[sg_fignewton]

So, it's only taken me two week so get halfway through the alphabet, sigh!

Nice stuff, this - Elliot and Lantash arguing, looking for motivations and ways out and... the final solution. Which is very Tok'ra-ish, isn't it?

I find it interesting that Lantash is so blase about taking unwilling hosts, though. As Katie M. put it, "The Tok'ra never taken unwilling hosts, except for when they do."

Thanks for contributing to the Soup! Glad to have you with us. :)

[dennydj]

Sorry for the delay in responding! Thanks so much for reading--glad you enjoyed it. I definitely enjoyed participating in the Soup challenge!