The Dog House

Aug 07, 2012 18:11

Title: The Dog House 
Rating: T 
Media: fic
Pairing/Characters: Ace, Whitebeard Pirates, Red Hair Pirates, Straw Hat Pirates & SmoAce because, that's what I live for.  
Word Count: 254, hehehe :) 
Prompt: 'misunderstanding' 
Summary: Ace messes up again, but no one is surprised anymore. or Ace is a little slutty and it's not okay.

posted to: onepiece_300
ace is a slut )

crew: akagami, crew: straw hats, character: portgas d. ace, crew: whitebeard, character: smoker, challenge: onepiece-300, fandom: one piece

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synvamp August 9 2012, 21:20:44 UTC
Naughty Ace! Oh, well I guess that is the risk of living a bachelor's life all footloose and fancy free! ;D

I must admit, if I were in the world of OP choosing just ONE man would be super difficult *lol*

You've done well capturing Ace's personality (and Luffy's) - the cheek of what he is doing but the slight sadness that he has been caught out! And you got heaps into the tiny, teeny word count - awesome work, especially for your first fanfic - keep writing!

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heheheh <3 denytheworld August 9 2012, 21:57:15 UTC
Ace is such a little ho. Gawd I love him. I can't blame him though he had an entire ocean of handsome men to choose from. X.X

He isn't even the least bit sorry either! I'm glad you saw that in the fic.

LOL I feel like I've misled you! It's not my first fanfic but my first time posting in the community! I was way worse when I started writing and I would have never had the nerve to share!

Thanks!

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