Cory...I hadn't yet read this but I just wanted to tell you...its amazing. The whole thing. Its palpable and tangible and distinct. Its written with feeling and objectivity at the same time. I love it. Its beautiful.
Aw, thanks Erin. That means a lot. It's not all where I want it to be, and I'm still planning some things out...but it's on it's way. Thanks! *huggles*
The memory of these children will haunt her for the rest of her life, well into her twenties and thirties. The actions of these children will continue to paralyze her regardless of the absurdity she will see in it all.
I don't know if that fits where you have it. It seems like to much of an important idea to just be tacked onto the end.
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I don't know if that fits where you have it. It seems like to much of an important idea to just be tacked onto the end.
Otherwise: beautiful. Very good job, Cory.
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*blushes* Thank you.
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