Prologue.
I can't believe I actually knocked out the prologue. Finally. The story actually feels real, now, and that's more than a little terrifying.
Okay, guys, here's the drill: this is a draft. A very, very rough draft. I've proofread it once for typos, but otherwise I'm posting it now in its very raw stage. Everything is subject to change at any ( Read more... )
Okay, guys, here's the drill: this is a draft. A very, very rough draft. I've proofread it once for typos, but otherwise I'm posting it now in its very raw stage. Everything is subject to change at any ( Read more... )
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Yeah, that's pretty much all I have to say. A very gripping beginning - I can't wait to see what happens next!
There was just one thing that confused me. This sentence:
He hit his knees without hesitation...
Now, this could just be my non-English-mother-tongue messing with my head (i've been up all day writing, so I'm pretty numb in the brain department at this point), but it took me a moment to get that he'd gone down on his knees.
Is "to hit one's knees" a way of saying that in English? I've never heard the expression.
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