Elsewhere

[lulabo]

AN: This is a fairly new fandom for me, writing-wise, so please let me know what you think. Lyrics by Sarah McLachlan, beta by ciachick711 and allthingsholy. Thanks. Generic, season four (though pretending the last few eps weren't).

Comments

[poisontaster]

Wow. Just...wow. This was thoroughly chilling, completely depressing, and utterly brilliant. I loved it.

You have a great grasp of Sydney, and your voice for her sounded dead on. I kept hearing JG's voice as I read this.

She grasps her sister’s wrists tightly in her hands, and together they twist the knife.
Your prose is both lyrical and spare (which I love), but this line in particular just gave me the shivers. There was something so...appropriate about it. Anyway, thanks for sharing!

[anonymous]

(This is Allison, unsigned in.)

I told you it was good and it was and it's awesome. I wish they'd done something like this on the show instead of copping out and having Nadia be all zombied out for her fight with Sydney. It was great and I love it. Well done, yo.

[irishaithne]

She has always known it would end this way.

Wow. Sydney and Nadia's fate - or whatever you want to call it - fascinates me. And this piece was just lovely, capturing Syd's feelings of betrayal and shock and fulfillment. Great job!

[sunshine_queen]

Oh, jeez. That was so painful and realistic.