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Strength, UruhaxAoi

Jul 01, 2007 16:32

Title: Strength
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Author: desastreparfait
Warnings: BDSM & a tinge of angst
Word Count: 638
Rating: PG-15
Summary: Aoi needed all his will power to convince himself that there was nothing delicate about the other, that there was no pleasure in this, that this was so very wrong...

( 'Strength' )

; angst, - one-shot, ; bdsm, : uruhaxaoi, ! pg-15

Comments 15

spider_tears July 1 2007, 14:56:06 UTC

This is amazing! wonderfully written!! There is only one bad thing.. and that is that is actually ends! >.<

shinjimimura03 July 1 2007, 15:08:41 UTC

oh i love it.
it was well written and very delicious.
you have to write more of this,
xx

yamada_akiha July 1 2007, 15:53:34 UTC

XD i told you people would love this XD
i have to re read it myself so many times also XD
hopefully with more poking here and there i can force you to write some smut.. XDDDDDD

and stop minding your age! if that is so, no 16 year old should be proclaiming that she's a Bi so loudly and running around screaming yaoi every where she go!!!

desastreparfait July 1 2007, 16:28:27 UTC

YAY! YOU COMMENTED! -glomps the little neko-chan-

Yes yes, though I didn't expect it. =/

Really? I thought you'd get bored after the 3rd time or so. O_O

DON'T POKE ME! -flails a whole lot- Ne, I'm not comfortable writing smut and posting it in PUBLIC OHEMGEEWTFBBQ!!!!111ELEVENTY-ONEGUH

My dear, I am very age conscious. And while I try, mind you, TRY to look smarter than other people my age, I don't wanna write something that's NC-17 when I'm only 15! IT'S WEIRD! >.<

yamada_akiha July 1 2007, 16:31:02 UTC

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narcolepticnemu July 1 2007, 16:07:12 UTC

Oh hawt. That warning is so wrong though. That's not MILD BDSM! XDD

desastreparfait July 1 2007, 16:19:18 UTC

Thank you for reading! I didn't expect anyone to think that it was the very least bit hawt.

EEP! I thought it was rather mild though.... >.< -whacks head-

narcolepticnemu July 1 2007, 16:32:31 UTC

Guess i just have weird kinks, darling XDD

Ah, well, it's not anything too bad. Your rating's fine <33

faustusfaustine July 1 2007, 17:11:33 UTC

hmm, this story feels like a car hitting me and then running away leaving me to die on the bitumen =D

HAHAHA.

I know I am being lame, great story there. >D

desastreparfait July 2 2007, 05:28:25 UTC

Was the cliff-hanger-esque ending really that bad? >.< Well, yamada_akiha is definitely not gonna stop poking me until I write a sequel. >_> SO THERE'S HOPE! -flails around-

Thank you for reading it! :D