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Jul 11, 2011 11:17

Title: Sink Right In
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Frank/Bob
Rating: R
Word count: 460
Warnings: Pain kink, bruises
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Frank always has bruises the next day, and he wears them like a badge, like he wants someone to ask.
Notes: Written for the bandom kissing meme prompt "Bob/Frank, kiss and make ( Read more... )

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chuckaloonie July 11 2011, 22:47:24 UTC
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH I CAN'T EVEN PUT IT INTO WORDS. Jesus, you've made me so happy I could cry. This was gorgeous and really, really hot. THe characterization is spot on; exactly how I like my Bob and Frank. This right there is the reason why they're my OTP.

THEN TAKE IT LIKE ONE. UNFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:46:16 UTC
:DDDD thanks girl! I want to write this pairing ALL THE TIME and basically want to write THIS KIND OF SEX between them all the time, so this was an awesome chance to give it a shot :D I'm SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. UGH.

TAKE IT LIKE ONE.

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jukeboxromeo July 12 2011, 10:54:04 UTC
*___________________*

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:46:35 UTC
Well thank you! :D

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jukeboxromeo July 15 2011, 21:49:05 UTC
Bruises may be a bulletproof kink for me. *__*

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rokittomars July 12 2011, 15:37:50 UTC
Bob/Frank?! Bruises?!! Hi, you are my favorite person in the worrrrrrrld right now, oh my god.

Just, just, asshole-ish Frank. Bruises. Bruuuuuuuises. *incoherent*

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:46:51 UTC
BRUISES. I KNOW RIGHT? UNF.

So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for commenting :D

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mistresscurvy July 12 2011, 18:16:44 UTC
God, I fucking love the way you write them as BOYS, as assholes, as these kinds of guys, the way that Bob knows what Frank is saying when he BITES HIM RIGHT IN THE SAME SPOT the next time, GUH, fuck I love this and I love YOU for writing this. BEST.

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:47:52 UTC
Mmmm thanks so much for commenting, I'm glad you liked it! I really enjoy the idea that they do this often enough to know what they actually mean and what they want! ♥

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tsubasa_no_ryu July 15 2011, 20:36:45 UTC
Oh, this is awesome. I love the little visual details - Frank tipping his head back, the way his throat moves when he drinks his beer, and then all the colours of the bruises (and I love that you never use the same colour twice).

And this exchange: "Lie down" - "Man up" - "Then take it like one" - that exchange was brilliant.

Also, I love that Bob can never find that voice to make Frank listen to him when they're not having sex. :D

Bob knows Frank won't kiss it better. But he also knows that next time, Frank's teeth will seek out exactly the same spot to sink in. Really, it's not all that different. - *___* LOVE.

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:48:37 UTC
Oh man, I really like asshole!sex dialogue, UNF UNF. So happy you liked those details, and enjoyed the story! :D

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