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[desfinado]

Title: A Delicate Art
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Frank/Gerard/Mikey/Ray
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: (indirect) incest, voyeurism
Word count: 7055
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Frank's band knows all about revenge plots.
Notes: Set roughly during the summer of 2003. Written for the amazing 2011 moldypitsandall challenge. Thank you so much

Comments

[nonmillecarinae]

WOW. this was clever and hysterically funny and the tone was just perfect, just spot on, every minute. the details of each scene, like with gerard and mikey sorting the chips? that is brilliant. this was amazing. this actually totally happened in real life, didn't it. I absolutely feel like it could have, the way you have written it. wonderfully, artfully done.

[desfinado]

Thank you! What a lovely comment. I enjoyed trying to keep things at a level of humour and interaction that would at least seem SOMEWHAT normal for them, despite the fact they were doing something kind of ridiculous. I'm so thrilled that worked for you. Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know your thoughts! :D

[so_many_fandoms]

YOU ARE MADE OF SO MUCH WIN. This was awesome! Not only was it hot, but you're also an awesome writer, what with the grammar and spelling and paragraph construction and rhythm and all that literary shit, and THAT's hot too. Fuck yeah!

[desfinado]

Awwww thank you! I have anoneknewmoose and shiningartifact mostly to thank for whipping my literary shit into shape :D So glad you enjoyed it and thought it was hot!

[desfinado]

I'm so glad it worked for you, especially when I get so nervous about writing dialogue for these dudes. It was a lot of fun to write, though! Thanks for reading and commenting :D

[desfinado]

Thank you! I did worry I was coming down too hard to the guy but seriously. USE YOUR OWN SOCKS. I'm so proud I made you laugh out loud!

♥

[monkey_pie]

Love this! I definitely laughed loudly more than once, excellent images and dialogue. Plus, it did get really hot with Frank watching his band - guh.

[desfinado]

Aw, yay! Thank you! It was sort of a ridiculous premise from the start, so it means that much more that you felt the images and dialogue worked. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :D