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[desfinado]

Title: A Delicate Art
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Frank/Gerard/Mikey/Ray
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: (indirect) incest, voyeurism
Word count: 7055
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Frank's band knows all about revenge plots.
Notes: Set roughly during the summer of 2003. Written for the amazing 2011 moldypitsandall challenge. Thank you so much

Comments

[annemaris]

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD. OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD. At one point I was certain that I couldn't ever stop laughing. OH MY GOD. This was so hot and so hilarious and SO HOT AND DID I MENTION IT WAS HOT? AND HILARIOUS? No, seriously, this part made me cackle for a REALLY LONG TIME:

"BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT," goes the horn.

"Fuck!" goes Ray, throwing both arms out and bolting upright.

"I didn't look!" Gerard says, slapping his hands over his eyes.

And then I flapped my hands around a lot. Fuuuuuuuuck, this was SO GOOD. (AND HILARIOUS AND HOT ETC ETC ETC)

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[desfinado]

:DDDDD THANK YOU! I struggled for a long time with writing dialogue and humour and it's only been these last few months that I've forced myself to work away at it, and it makes me SO HAPPY to hear you say you found it hot AND funny! Seriously. THANK YOU. ♥

[bebunny]

This has to contain the HOTTEST descriptions of Ray I have ever read. Oh my god. seriously.

[desfinado]

Yay! This was my first time writing him into a pairing and oh man apparently my brain was just WAITING FOR THE CHANCE because it could have easily gotten away from me as a whole ode-to-Ray-touching-his-own-dick sort of thing *___________* UNF. I'm thrilled you felt that way, thanks for taking the time to read and comment! :D

[desfinado]

:D I wasn't even TRYING for sweet (I will admit I was attempting gross and hot) but damn, I just like making these boys HAPPY because THEY ARE A BAND OF CUPCAKES. UGH. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such lovely, constructive feedback! ♥

[concinnity]

"I think it would be if he was, like, blowing his load on Frank's toes while he slept," Mikey says. He's stacking Doritos on top of each other now. Frank sometimes wonders if the rock star life has passed them by.

"No one is blowing their load on my toes," Frank says.

"That you know of," Gerard points out.

ALWP. Oh, man. I loved this. :DDDDDD

[desfinado]

Aw, I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for taking the time to comment :D

[heyhoolou]

Still laughing, omg. So incredibly brilliant! *hearteyes* ♥!!

[desfinado]

Thank you! What a lovely thing to say. I'm so happy you liked it :D