::pretend about never::

[desired_abuse]

let's pretend we never happened

Comments

[nearrlynaked]

i like that.

[preludetoicecrm]

Me too. I <3 your poetry.

[invisble]

You're much better when you write freeform. It's almost like you forget to be trite and forced, and we see the real you for half a second.

"let's pretend we never happened
we saw, we conquered, came, and left"

That's a line on par with just about anything that's ever been written. If the entire poem were in the same vein as:

"let's pretend we watched the sun set
danced across the boulevard
and the cold didn't swirl
between us"

you could forget about suicide girls and be the next Sylvia Plath...

...but much better looking.

[_blue_pulse]

riding in your car in your state in your world in my dreams

listening to "let's pretend" by no-fi

i thought of this poem.

i remember too much of you.
like sitting on zach's couch
and reciting your i-want-a-dog-a-big-one-one-i-can-run-and-play-fetch-with.
why do i do these things. my mind is far far far too crowded. swollen.

and now theres more of you.

i

sometimes i really dont know