fanfic.

[desperatehell]

Title: Dead Souls
Genre: Hancest
Pairing: Zaylor
Rating: R. maybe X. but definitely R.
length: 1,343
Chapters: One?
Notes: a little bit more cut to the chase compared to my last story... but filthy none the less!

Zac crept through the crack in the white wooden door, and into the blackened bedroom.  It was a room so black that you could

Comments

[lire_casander]

Shame and pride were made alike that night. He would remember nothing else.

This was hot, but also so sad. The last line made me feel like crying, because they have nothing left. I love hope, but this just... sort of burnt it out.

BTW, I've missed you!!! How's everything going, dear? I want to hear about you!

Hey there

[theradiovomited]

Great story! It's hard to find this stuff anymore. How much have you written? I added you as a friend...How long have you liked Hanson?
I'm going to go look for more...

Keep it up.

hi

[theradiovomited]

oh my fod do you think hanson are bsexy to do you want to fuck taylor hanson i do i miss him now that they are he snot on tour now but the line of his ass would his backline would be al cream over my hips as his fuing finger tips slide over the tulips and as his finger tips hold my breath hin him. as his mouth emerges into an shaped dounut of gods cream appels as his lips are as red as candy apples and as his ass keeps humping me uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes yeah taylor hanson oas our asses butss were humping so fasly alot and as his finge rtips touched my erotic,.

[dessilyn]

Now this...THIS gets a giant BRAVO. It wasn't too hard to read, and the grammar was head on.

Now aside from my nitpicking ;)

Let's bring cyinicism into the mix of 'cestfic. rawr, baby, rawr. I like that detached reasoning for sexual release. Its powerful and saddening and unbelievably sexy all at once. I could see it, played out like a psychologically sado-masochistic scene in some dark movie. This is brilliance in the world of PWP smut.

All in all, it does sadden me that this journal hasn't been updated. Or maybe it has and its FO? If it is then tell me and i'll certainly add. MOST.DEF. lol. I think I may anyhow just for the fuck of it. I would much like to see more.

HI

[vascohanson]

I ADD YOUAS A FRIEND AND I WANT TO READ MORE IF IT'S POSSIBLE.

again...you've done it again

[ikeypoo97]

fuck..i just came reading that...*goes to take a cold shower*