My first piece of work!
Title: I'm Using My Fingers instead of Words..
Genre: Hancest
Pairing: Zaylor
Rating: R. maybe X. but definitely R.
length: 1,723
Chapters: One?
Notes: This is my first Hanson fiction, and I worked really hard on it. My friend Lindsay helped me, after we decided that we couldn't find any Hanson stories that we hot enough for consumption, we wrote our own ( Read more... )
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I like your icon. Got any I can have?
"Excoriated" actually means to criticize.....I think you're using it wrong...:)
Cheers.
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Although, I could say that you should worry more about grammar. Making a hot story doesn't have to include words that even *I*(and that's saying something) need to look up. I'm not trying to sound rude, really I'm not. Its just hard to enjoy a good smut whenever I have to ref m-w.com to understand half of it whilst there are a slew of grammatical errors in there as well.
It was still readable, much better than many I've seen. And very very hot in that violent sort of fashion that I haven't seen in a while. Overall a good read, though it could use some cleaning up in the technical dept.
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