Saiyuki Fic, Sorrow Floats--Chapter 4--NC 17

[despina_moon]

Title: Sorrow Floats, Chapter 4
Author: Despina_Moon
Pairing: Gojyo/Kanan
Summary: Gojyo has a surprising secret from his past he can no longer hide. Will it change everything in the present? Saiyuki AU. Mostly.

Many, many thanks to my beta readers, the amazing moshesque and the fabulous whymzycal. Those two have humored me and put up with months of whining and crying

Comments

[7veilsphaedra]

Next thing I knew, there were 3 more chapters posted. This is definitely one of those primal heartbreakers. It is interesting how many correlations there are between Kanaan and Hakkai. She didn't really think that flower-shop burning thing through, or how it could fall back on Gojyo, did she? I like how you've wound in Dr. Ni, very creepy!

[pfmoi]

Once again, very fantastic. I like the parallels between Kanan and Gojyo's mum. I also like Kanan commenting on how much you can learn from books, lmao.

[minidrag33]

Wow.. so great! I love this story and look forward to each chapter. So wonderfully written. Made me get all teary.
Thanks for sharing!

[mulzrule]

I just read all four parts in one sitting. You know, I think I like this backstory and Kanan/Gojyo better then the origional. Sorry Hakkai! It's all despina's fault!

[laurabryannan]

This part was steamy but still so emotionally satisfying. Your Kanan is so interesting. I love how flawed she is.