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Saiyuki Fic, Sorrow Floats--Chapter 6--NC17

Jun 24, 2009 06:16

Title: Sorrow Floats, Chapter 6
Author: Despina_Moon
Pairing: Gojyo/Kanan
Summary: Gojyo has a surprising secret from his past he can no longer hide. Will it change everything in the present? Saiyuki AU. Mostly.

Many, many thanks to my beta readers, the amazing moshesque and the fabulous whymzycal. Those two have humored me and put up with months of whining and crying ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

purpleicicles June 24 2009, 22:51:42 UTC

Masato is so coool!!! I also like the small seed of a larger problem here (Re: Masato) and the final entry of Hakkai! :D Oh goodness, now I really dread the events of the last chapter... :S

suanz June 25 2009, 01:02:12 UTC

I did not expect this for Chapter 6 cos I thought it will be the finale whereby Kanan never came back and continues from where Gojyo first met Gonou.

I like the part on how Gojyo came to learn his gambling skills...

Thanks. :)

minidrag33 June 25 2009, 01:18:03 UTC

Very engrossing story. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

ginnyvos June 25 2009, 08:51:49 UTC

Masato is interesting indead. I like him... And helloooo Hakkai. I wonder how Kanan will tell him she's now together with her brother... It'll break poor Gojyo, I'm sure.
The furtune teller is awesome and an interesting asset. I hope Griff changes, I really like him...

And just because it needs to be said? I like the casual sexyness of the Kanan/Gojyo interaction as well as the... not-so-casual sexyness :P

avierra June 25 2009, 19:14:02 UTC

This is such a lovely chapter; the whole story so far is so poignant, but this is even more so, because it's clear by the end of it that he and Kanan are pretty much over, despite both of them (but especially Kanan-- and that's interesting to me, Gojyo is really the soul of realistic pragmatism, isn't he) pretending they aren't, and him wishing desperately it wasn't so.

Other tidbits I really liked were the drug-induced retr-sight... I am not even sure what to call, it but his visions of his past life; his vision of Banri with a skull as a head. I like that you did that, because Gojyo in canon seems to have some sort of psychic abilities (at least in regards to Hakkai), even though he doesn't seem to realize that's what it is, or that he has that ability. So it's neat that you expanded on that.

But you are really tearing out my heart with this story so far, and that's a good thing. :D