absolute loved the fic! awesome and u ended very well! but i wanna some extra?! please?please?please? =DDDDDDDDDDDDDD thanks so much for sharing with us
This fic is made of so much awesome, I just don't know where to start.
Uhm. Random points of love: The Kou/Doku/Yaone threesome, and the fact that you've got them putting it back together after Duty and StepMother forced it apart. Hakkai kicking the sh*t out of Banri. ^_^v The 393 on the side, and Goku being all fanboy over Gojyo. All the supporting characters you incorporated and where you placed them, from Hazel and Gat to Nataku, and ZAKURO. ♥ I swear, he's got to be my favorite minor character ever and it's awesome to see him included in fic. Much love for the role you gave him.
Also, Hakuryuu, omg. ♥ You have my undying love and squeeful gratitude for what you did with him in this fic. Not only did you include him, not only did you give him a fairly substantial and important supporting role that retains his canon place as part of Hakkai's emotional/psychological support structure, you gave him his own personality that's not carbon-copy-Goujun, for all that it draws on echoes of him here and there. ♥ There
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Oh, man, I'm so behind. Thank you, this comment made my day!
Hee! Zakuro totally stole the show, even when I was writing it. My AU's (all two of them) must have Hakuryuu, I mean he is part of the team and I can't stand to have him overlooked. This time I tried to translate his playful side, because he does tease Gojyo a lot.
Yeah, I totally agree, they should be a team. They were in Industry Rule 4080. I'm nothing if not predictable.
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♥ ♥ ♥ with a headbutt from Shun.
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Awwww, and Sanzo-Ikkou in the end. Beautiful!
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So maybe this one can go to minus wave? XD
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awesome
and u ended very well!
but i wanna some extra?! please?please?please?
=DDDDDDDDDDDDDD
thanks so much for sharing with us
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Annnnd, what kind of extra were you thinking about? Anything specific?
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Extra 2 - Gojyo x Hakkai after some years! \o\
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one of the best fics i had ever seen in my life! really!
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Stupid school.
Thanks again!
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Uhm. Random points of love: The Kou/Doku/Yaone threesome, and the fact that you've got them putting it back together after Duty and StepMother forced it apart. Hakkai kicking the sh*t out of Banri. ^_^v The 393 on the side, and Goku being all fanboy over Gojyo. All the supporting characters you incorporated and where you placed them, from Hazel and Gat to Nataku, and ZAKURO. ♥ I swear, he's got to be my favorite minor character ever and it's awesome to see him included in fic. Much love for the role you gave him.
Also, Hakuryuu, omg. ♥ You have my undying love and squeeful gratitude for what you did with him in this fic. Not only did you include him, not only did you give him a fairly substantial and important supporting role that retains his canon place as part of Hakkai's emotional/psychological support structure, you gave him his own personality that's not carbon-copy-Goujun, for all that it draws on echoes of him here and there. ♥ There ( ... )
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Hee! Zakuro totally stole the show, even when I was writing it. My AU's (all two of them) must have Hakuryuu, I mean he is part of the team and I can't stand to have him overlooked. This time I tried to translate his playful side, because he does tease Gojyo a lot.
Yeah, I totally agree, they should be a team. They were in Industry Rule 4080. I'm nothing if not predictable.
Thank you so much, you totally rock.
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