Edit Report 2

[desuvan]

Well, the editing process may take a little longer than originally anticipated,since I'm probably going to be making a major plot point change. Two of the characters "hook up", to use the vernacular, and as I've been reading back over it, and reading some reader's reactions, I think it hurts the story more than it helps. It was meant to have

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[katmoonshaker]

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