Part Four

[detachment_guy]

"Where is my master the rebel prince
Who will shut all of these windows
It's these windows all around me
It's these windows who are telling me
To rid my dirty mind of all of its preciousness."

Oz/Andrew slash, post-ftvs
Oz and Andrew belong to Monseuir Whedon
Lyrics by Rufus Wainwright

Comments

[bitterbyrden]

SQUEEEEE!

MANSEX! Oh Andrew, you little minx. What a lucky boy you are that Oz is busting that cherry. So patient. Loving. What a nice boy, that Daniel Osbourne.

GOOD JOB, Brandy! You did it! You got them fucking! It was well worth the wait, as I've mentioned. Or, at least, as I meant to mention. Excellent work.

xoxo

Typosees:

"down to Andrew's trim waste" - waist
"as relaxed back onto his knees" - missing a "he"
"rubbing feircely against" -- fiercely

Recommendation:

just use "tight virgin ass" once, because that sure is a strong, notable phrase

[sodapopprincess]

Hehehehehe. I agree about tight, virgin ass. I will have to read over it again and make your corrections. Thanks for watching out for them. In the few spare moments at work, I can only do so much in. *loves*

So Oz, not too nice? I felt like I kept restraining him a bit, becuase it was important for Andrew, but on the other hand, I wanted him to get down and dirty as well. Alas. Maybe another time. Next pairing will have to be with someone more experienced, so I won't mind (pun intended) tearing him a new asshole. Just have to ponder who...

BTW, this makes me miss Le FTVS. Maybe I will try to butt in on Theatrical Muse after all.