JASMINE, FOREVER

[deusssexmachina]

When I saw this month´s topic in Brigitsflame, it prompted me to write tfor the contest again, although I had long ago decided not to.
The topic is JASMINE, FOREVER, and let´s just say it touched me in quite a special way. I immediately knew I had something to say, namely because incidentally, Jasmine is the name of the bassist of one of my

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[littleflapper]

awww můžeš to dát pod lj cut? uplně mi to zahltilo flist :(

[deusssexmachina]

promin, nemůžu, je to do soutěže kde lidi volí, a oni by na to pak neklikli a radši si přečetli jiný příspěvek kde to uvidí hned, to je systém :(

[darlinleo]

I am so glad that you were inspired by the prompt to come back! That was incredibly touching.

I did see numerous typos that you may want to go through and correct (funny how I never notice such things in my own writings until they're pointed out).

Welcome back to the FLAME!

[deusssexmachina]

I would, but I can´t find them and my word refused to go through it in english, only in czech, which wasn´t helpful. Sorry for that!

[darlinleo]

Hey, mistakes happen. I just wanted to make you aware. Again, I like what you did with this piece and I hope to see you around more :D

[deusssexmachina]

well maybe you could point some out for me? *puppy eye*

[missflyer]

This is very touching, and so true. I really like how you show Hizaki first coming to terms with Jasmine's death, then continuing to live after it. Thanks for submitting again, I enjoyed reading it :)

[deusssexmachina]

Thank you! I already managed three posts in BF this month, it will be so worth it if I pass into the last round! :D

[deusssexmachina]

It so turned out that the prompt was very personal for me!
I was also glad it brought me back :)

[dixophilia]

This is very well done. Hizaki's feelings are portrayed very well and the emotions just ooze from this piece. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

[deusssexmachina]

Thank you! Maybe I will write more about Versailles soon, I´m seeing them next month in Budapest :)

[dixophilia]

Oh! So very lucky you are. I hope you enjoy your time seeing them. :)

[deusssexmachina]

If I get pics, Ill post them!