Dewdrop, Amulet

[deusssexmachina]

Another Brigitsflame entry. This is written from the viewpoint of a man, do not connect first person with me :)

DEWDROP, AMULET

I´m not what you would call a heartbreaker, quite on the other hand. Ever since pre-school, girls have been mysterious entities for me - ones I could not comprehend even upon approaching the end of my university studies,

Comments

[vyvyan_wilde]

Charming story! One of my favorite parts was at the beginning when the man describes the wooing tactics boys use and how they change as they mature. He may be inexperienced, but he sees those sorts of things with clear eyes. The other part I really liked was how the woman became divine to him again- he recognized she was human, but still revered her.

I did catch a few typos and some sentences that could be rephrased- would you like me to post them?

[deusssexmachina]

Thank you! It was a last minute idea but I loved it very much. However, since it was so last minute, I never had it reviewed by anyone!