Comments | deusssexmachina: BAD ADVICE

deusssexmachina

BAD ADVICE

Jul 10, 2011 15:19

DISCLAIMER: This is a short story that takes place in the Wraeththu universe. The Wraeththu chronicles belong to Storm Constantine, I claim no rights on Ulaume, Flick, their family and friends.
INFO FOR PEOPLE WHO SEE THIS FOR THE FIRST TIME: The Wraeththu are post-apocalyptic beings that evolved from humans. They do not age and are also ( Read more... )

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deusssexmachina July 11 2011, 21:19:43 UTC

Thank you, it was already getting slightly lenghty for week 1, but I am going to continue with it for next week (and as far as I come), so you definitely will get to know more about all that if you keep reading :)

kithlyara July 14 2011, 02:07:08 UTC

Your story has me really intrigued about the world and characters you're using. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more :D

deusssexmachina July 17 2011, 03:47:00 UTC

Thanks! And I am hoping that I´ll manage to post it in time...

greenwillow27 July 14 2011, 06:47:06 UTC

Interesting premise for the next stage (?) of humanity. You've shown given us a good start into the characters and their relationships.

deusssexmachina July 17 2011, 03:47:29 UTC

Heh, definitely the next (and best) stage :)

leticiae July 14 2011, 16:09:54 UTC

What a great world to create. I love the way its spun together.

What an intriguing tale. I loved the realization that the bad advice was coming from your spouse's friend. For some reason, that really appealed to me.

deusssexmachina July 17 2011, 03:46:27 UTC

Thank you! Unfortunately, as the description says, I happen to be shamelessly using this world, I have not created it myself xD Hopefully it doesn´t strip it of attractiveness...