Every family has its secrets.

[deusssexmachina]

DISCLAIMER: This is a short story that takes place in the Wraeththu universe. The Wraeththu chronicles belong to Storm Constantine, I claim no rights on Ulaume, Aleeme, Flick, their family and friends.
INFO FOR PEOPLE WHO SEE THIS FOR THE FIRST TIME: The Wraeththu are post-apocalyptic beings that evolved from humans. They do not age and are also

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[silverflight8]

Hello! I am picking up an edit for this week, so hi, I'm silver.

it was mostly a dead weight upon his cold shoulders.
-This is a really good description of his hair, and gives a good impression of what his emotional state is, actually ;P

Aleeme wouldn´t survive to be among so many hara. -Here it sounds like you imply that he would live long enough to be amongst so many, but since you say 'tonight' it sounds unlikely - perhaps try changing it by removing "to be" from the sentence, so that it talks only about his discomfort about being around people

[leticiae]

Wow! That last paragraph were Ulaume could have bared his soul, but didn't. That really got to me. I loved it. When I read last week's and this week's I kind of thought of him as a jerk until then. Now I have a whole level of compassion for him.

That blew me away.