ADMIN: Section 3 first draft extension - REALLY IMPORTANT

[beren_writes]

PLEASE READ - VERY IMPORTANTSection 3 first drafts are now due Thursday 19th Nov (due to certain work commitments which make this weekend a real pain in the rear [it looks like I'm going to be working until around 10pm today and I started at 7 am]). Artists will be given their assignments on Friday

Comments

[mieka_writes]

1) Andromeda Rising

2) Less a paragraph and more a scene..
The burst of savage swearing out of Chai when Kiro had flipped his fighter around and gone back for another close in pass had him trying vainly to stifle his laughter. Chai was used to be the top pilot, but Kiro flew like he was the fighter and it was pissing Chai off to no end.

“Fine, but no more fancy shit,” snarled Chai as Dorian fought down his giggles. “Bite as many as you can and if that doesn’t work get the fuck back out.”

“Rommie tailored things.”

“I know that,” Chai was seething. “I watched Romeo and Timo fight it and had to listen to them bitch about the hangover yesterday. Get in, Get out.”
“Yo-ho, yo-ho, yo-ho,” quipped Kiro and Dorian had to toggle his mic off to keep from openly laughing at his partner.

“Cullen“Aye-aye, no mucking about

[di_glossia]

1) Lightweight at the Helm

[di_glossia]

I know this is already long as anything but here is the bit I really wanted to offer as a sample

[beren_writes]

1) Black and White (Panik, Linke/Jan, NC17/18)
2) He didn't want them to be afraid, that was the last thing he wanted, but he didn't have the energy to so much as lift his head. He was sprawled on the floor in an unceremonious heap and he wasn't going anywhere for a little while at least.

"Is he breathing?" Jan asked, sounding very worried.

"Don't you think a better question would be, is he going to eat us?" Franky asked and Linke managed to give a small whine at that one; he had no intention of eating anyone.

Linke bared his teeth for good measure

[fyredancer]

1) "Signal to Noise" - Tokio Hotel, Tom/Bill, NC-17 overall

2) It's really hard to pick "favorite" bits, I don't think I really have favorite bits but I tried to pick out a few of the more visual moments that stood out for me:

The liquid crystal display screen flickered with a pale light as the skinny black-haired boy leaned over it, starting up the terminal and seating himself before it. Bill Kaulitz leaned in close to the terminal as though it could provide warmth as well as light. He rubbed his hands together, lacing his fingers and regarding his black-tipped nails, then he stretched his hands forth and cracked a few joints before moving his hands nimbly over the terminal keyboard. All around him in the darkened room, rows of workstations turned blind terminal eyes on his hunched form.

Frustrated, he shook his head. He kept hoping, but it was always the same. Noise had been one of the first, possibly the first, to get hit by the alien life-forms by what was now known across the network bulletins as the Incursion. Yet even

[fyredancer]

There's also some action.

“Get a grip, Kaulitz,” Striker was saying, his handsome face twisting into an unattractive sneer

[houseofmissr]

Do we know if that's everyone now?

I tried to look back, not sure if there is one more to come - does this mean we have more artists than section 3s?! :)

[beren_writes]

Not sure yet, am about to kick the authors one more time :)