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deuxexmycroft

Fic: Headspace

Jun 07, 2011 14:38

Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: rape, nightmares, description of torture, character death (sort of)

No-one prompted this so I just had to write it!

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( Sherlock wakes up. And wakes up and wakes up and wakes up ... )

sherlock/john, fanfic

Comments 41

hestia14 June 7 2011, 06:36:43 UTC

Okay, this is a testament to the skill of your writing. This was soooo good, but it tore me to pieces. (take that as a compliment please)

Thank you for not making it the ending I was expecting though. Please, please write more in this fandom. You keep me on the edge of my seat with all of your stories.

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 20:41:10 UTC

I'll happily take it as a compliment :D

I love this fandom! I'll definitely write more. Out of interest, how did you think it was going to end??

hestia14 June 7 2011, 21:11:11 UTC

"I love this fandom! I'll definitely write more. "
YAY! For I have devoured you stories. Would you mind if I add you as a friend so I can never miss a story?

I though that the story would end where Sherlock was locked up and Lestrade told him what he had done. Since this was a horror story, that would be a true kick to the gut (in a good way).

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 21:33:22 UTC

Yay! Go for it :D

Ooh er. That would be a scary place to end! I haven't really worked myself up enough to write a truly bad everyone-gets-fucked-up ending yet. Maybe one day.

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errantcomment June 7 2011, 11:20:01 UTC

Omg, this was so good. I thought for one moment he actually was you know... Raping John. And I was like, horrified because in a moment he was gonna realise and !
And it's been a while since I've been that immersed in something.
Thanks.

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 20:42:23 UTC

Ah, yes, Sherlock does bad things when he doesn't think there'll be any consequences ...

Thanks!

eightnoon June 7 2011, 11:57:19 UTC

Whoa! That was creepy as hell and so well written.

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 20:42:57 UTC

Yay because creepy is what I was going for! Thanks!

lindentreeisle June 7 2011, 12:24:50 UTC

Wowwww. Apparently you write excellent horror. Nice.

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 20:43:38 UTC

I'm liking horror :D
I need to write moooore.
Thank you!

batgurl10 June 7 2011, 14:41:50 UTC

this was wonderful. each one had me scared it was reality--esp the prison one --YIKES. excellent writing, wow. =)

deuxexmycroft June 7 2011, 20:45:07 UTC

Hehe thank you! I was actually going to write out what Sherlock did to John as a dream, but then I thought 'no this is way too sick' and kept it as a memory.