Comments | deuxexmycroft: Fic: Headspace

deuxexmycroft

Fic: Headspace

Jun 07, 2011 14:38

Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: rape, nightmares, description of torture, character death (sort of)

No-one prompted this so I just had to write it!

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( Sherlock wakes up. And wakes up and wakes up and wakes up ... )

sherlock/john, fanfic

Comments 41

likes2lurk June 11 2011, 21:15:36 UTC

Wow! I really loved this! After it ended I was just staring at the screen for a few minutes, eyes wide and blinking really slowly before I went: "That's it? Thank God." (That sounds bad, but I mean it in a 'It ended happy (or really, happier)' and way not with Sherlock chopping to Sherlock to bits and you roller-coastering my emotions (EVEN MORE!).

I love the rationalization of Sherlock's brain. It's not really John, so it's okay to rape him.

I just loved how many layers of this there were. There's the hospital and the bed and the kitchen and the prison and then really John. It was lovely. Really lovely.

deuxexmycroft June 11 2011, 21:51:55 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, I didn't want to drag out the ending. Hope it wasn't too sudden.

Haha yes, Sherlock's brain is a scary place (and that's why I like it)!

And wolf-in-sheep's-clothing John, although he didn't keep Sherlock around for long. Again, thank you very much!

likes2lurk June 11 2011, 22:21:56 UTC

No, not too sudden. I was just enraptured in the story. The fact that it's Sherlock's mind made the shifts really good, flitting from instance to instance, just the way his brain must work. And yeah, Sherlock's a scary place, and you captured it well, I do believe.

zevbaldwin June 12 2011, 06:06:30 UTC

Now we know all the most secret desires and fears of Sherlock. Fascinating!
I really liked it. Briliant!

deuxexmycroft July 1 2011, 11:34:56 UTC

Thank you!

mamishka June 29 2011, 12:06:03 UTC

Wow, I just found this and I think it is one of the most creepy and disturbing things that I have ever read here, in no small part to the fact that each dream segment was so believable on some level. The part where Lestrade told Sherlock that he had cut John up into little pieces.... *SHUDDER!*

So creepy and disturbing! Can't tell you how grateful I am that it was all dreams and hallucinations, though even that is still pretty perturbing - all those possibilities existing in Sherlock's mind. Yeek.

deuxexmycroft July 1 2011, 11:34:47 UTC

Thanks very much! Haha, yes, this Sherlock has quite a vivid imagination :D

mesmerized_mia July 13 2011, 21:32:12 UTC

Wow... for a moment there, I really thought Sherlock would actually rape the real John without realizing it truly _was_ reality after all.
Wow. I'm.. blown away. I love your fics, I'll be creeping around your journal quite a bit from now on, I think. Mind if I friend you?

deuxexmycroft July 14 2011, 00:22:21 UTC

Yes this could have gone a lot darker! Still, a change in hairstyle is a scary justification. "Omg John, don't cut your hair if you don't want me to rape you!"

Thanks very much, and sure you can :)

mesmerized_mia July 14 2011, 10:23:59 UTC

Hehhe.
"Omg John, don't cut your hair if you don't want me to rape you!"
<-- I laughed at that very hard and didn't even feel bad. I think that might make me a bad person.

anonymous September 22 2011, 02:57:48 UTC

I wish I could write a nice long comment telling you just how great of a writer I think you are and just how great I think this story is but it would take FAR too long. So just know that this story is FLAWLESS and you are so very talented. :)

deuxexmycroft September 25 2011, 03:04:37 UTC

That's very kind of you! Thank you :)