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Painful Reality-Part 1

Oct 04, 2011 19:59

Title: Painful Reality
Pairing: SasuNaru
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Summary: Naruto awoke in a field bathed by stars with a raven looking over him. In this world, there was no more pain, no more beatings. The reality was only a fairytale now. In this new world, Naruto gets to experience the one thing he never truly had... but how long can this reality go ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

laitsah October 7 2011, 22:11:58 UTC

When you said "Leave a rainbow" I wasn't sure what that meant. So when I was looking though the list of options to leave a comment, I ignored the "Leave a Rainbow" until I realized what it meant.

Stupid me!

I thought Naruto didn't understand the voices? Or was it because Itachi and Sasuke were speaking in a different language?

deviantly_kinz October 7 2011, 22:15:19 UTC

Ahaha, oops. I should have made that more clear :)! And he didn't understand the voices because his mind was like extremely tired, so to speak, so he wasn't really paying attention to the voices. I hope that makes sense v.v. Thanks for commenting :D!

licketyli November 1 2011, 04:55:32 UTC

Ohh, I like this a lot! It is definitely different. I can't wait to find out what exactly Sasuke and Itachi are. :D