Comments | devilaugh: Emotions like a Storm

devilaugh

Emotions like a Storm

Feb 16, 2013 21:28

Pairing: Changmin/Jaejoong ( Read more... )

pairing: changmin/jaejoong, length: oneshot, !_starcandy challenge, !prompt writing

Comments 4

kot_kendra February 18 2013, 05:20:30 UTC

wow it's really interesting seeing this side of changmin, what roots deep inside an angry changmin <3 I am looking forward to more writing from you ;)

devilaugh June 26 2013, 12:46:25 UTC

Totally late reply, but I'm so relieved for positive feedback. I like to try different writing styles, so I hope you can read more fics ;P

ext_2049254 July 17 2013, 07:50:57 UTC

I like this! But I can do without the 'PS'. It's kind of , um, watering down the climax? It's perfect when it ends with 'please come home after the storm'.

devilaugh July 17 2013, 08:44:40 UTC

Haha, you are totally right about that. See, this was actually written literally just hours after my best friend and I had a huge fight. Her phone ended up leaving her possession, so the only way I could communicate with her was through the internet. But because we had already had a very long back and forth fight via texts, I chose to write out my feelings and send them to her. Every time I reread parts of it to check for errors, I would suddenly remember why I was mad at her and my anger would flare up. The PS is for her because I wanted her to know that even though I wanted to get past the fight, I was still very mad. She hasn't read it and I don't think she will, so I will just take that part out since it really doesn't fit.