Title: Quicksand (7/7) Pairing(s): Brittana, Quick, lesbros Rating: Mature Part One (flist, please forgive me posting all seven at once. i love you. shh shh *smooch*)
How does one express praise and admiration without gushing like a lovesick idiot? :-)
I read all seven generously written chapters in one sitting and boy, am I smitten. You definitely have a way of putting thrill, angst, mush, and fluff together beautifully. I must admit though, I was pleasantly distracted by all the smutt-y goodness of chapter five that I failed to appreciate the adventure that is dirt-bike racing and skipped a few paragraphs along the way... *hides in shame*
You have a gift, keep up the amazing writing. I will surely be looking forward to more of your work.
Now if you'll excuse me, I will now take a cold shower and attempt to calm my racing heart. I blame you for all the very hot daydreaming to come, so to speak. ;-)
I'm not sure if I should apologize for the smut or the pesky dirtbike action. ;)
But seriously though, thank you for taking the time to comment, that alone means a lot to me. That you enjoyed it? Means the world. Reading your comments made my face look like this: XD ...when I wasn't laughing at the fact that my smut distracted you from the plot. Oopsies. Thank you so much. ♥
Loved this! Especially the side characters you used and how. I also appreciate that nothing was predictable about this story, I never knew what to expect and stopped trying to guess halfway through. I haven't done that while reading fic in god knows how long. The whole thing played out in my head like a movie. Major kuddos.
That's so cool that you saw it playing out like a movie. My original goal, when I started this, was to try to write something like Fast and the Furious meets Blue Crush
♥ Really glad to hear you enjoyed it, extra thankful that you took the time to comment. Thanks. ♥
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I read all seven generously written chapters in one sitting and boy, am I smitten. You definitely have a way of putting thrill, angst, mush, and fluff together beautifully. I must admit though, I was pleasantly distracted by all the smutt-y goodness of chapter five that I failed to appreciate the adventure that is dirt-bike racing and skipped a few paragraphs along the way... *hides in shame*
You have a gift, keep up the amazing writing. I will surely be looking forward to more of your work.
Now if you'll excuse me, I will now take a cold shower and attempt to calm my racing heart. I blame you for all the very hot daydreaming to come, so to speak. ;-)
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But seriously though, thank you for taking the time to comment, that alone means a lot to me. That you enjoyed it? Means the world. Reading your comments made my face look like this: XD ...when I wasn't laughing at the fact that my smut distracted you from the plot. Oopsies. Thank you so much. ♥
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♥ Really glad to hear you enjoyed it, extra thankful that you took the time to comment. Thanks. ♥
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