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kktsubasa May 4 2011, 01:29:19 UTC
oh damn i'm first ? ! this is new too XDDD man this felt so real
i ship hyunber too <3 i really enjoy this i hope you write more soon

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devilslover422 June 19 2011, 01:42:25 UTC
yaya to hyunber shippers!!!!!!!!!!!11 we need more of u guys!!!!!!!!! lol

im sooo glad u liked this!!!! i had no idea what i was doing but i like the way it turned out!!! and im sooo happy that it felt real, i was aiming for it!! lol

THANK U FOR READING!!!!!!!

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kdsaj2 May 4 2011, 05:13:30 UTC
SPOT ! Lesbo smut FTW !!

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kdsaj2 May 4 2011, 05:55:15 UTC
OMG that was so hot. I think it was the only girl on girl smut I've read beside this one JeTi xD Amber mad me blush and Sohyun, Hyuna are so cute !! :DDD
'“What are you doing?”

“Just online.”

“Looking up rumors about me?”

“No.” she lied.

“Yes.”

“Yes.”

ahahaha so cute Hyuna ♥
and the ending is just LOL, this is great ! xDDD

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kdsaj2 May 15 2011, 08:13:07 UTC
i would have loved it if you fixed up the tiny little gramatical mistakes but other then that it was HOT... keke very nice.. liked the scissoring action there.. haha first HyunBer fic... haha ratedness is JJANG!!! PHONE SEX IS BECOMING SO POPULAR NOWADAYS!!! LOL XDDD

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devilslover422 June 19 2011, 01:53:48 UTC
oh wow, im sorry about the grammar. i get a certain way when im not writing for school. lol and legit some time i just dont want to reread my stories after im done, i just want to post and be done. lol sorry about that.

im glad this was ur first hyunber fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank u for reading!!!!!!!!

i love how open u are!!!!!!! lol the scissoring!! lol ur a good job!!!! :D

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sillykilljoys September 2 2011, 02:06:20 UTC
First Yuri fic evarr. jasddkf;jasdklfjsdkfljsdfklajsdfkl; Good GOD WHERE HAS THIS STUFF BEEN MY WHOLE LIFE? I have to poke around outside of my 2PM shell.. -shivers- Amber is such a goddamn turn on...>.< AND HYUNA'S SO CUTE. oomoomomoomoo.. AND YOU TOTALLY WRITE SMUT. THIS IS SO FKIN SESSSIIII. and at the end.. ROFLCOPTERRR xDDD

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devilslover422 September 2 2011, 12:40:52 UTC
right?!?!?!?!?!?!? hyunber is like my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

isn't she!!!! Like i blushed the entire time writing this. idk why, but she makes a great make believe dude!!! she just does, esp as a blonde!!! and i hate hyuna, with a passion, but she's soooo right and acceptable with amber!!! AMBER HEALS EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!! lol

unfortunately i think im the only person who writes Hyunber. lol such a shame, and i only write it spaced. i need to pull more people in. this is a series actually, there is one more story in the mix and then it'll be done. i need to change the big title tho, to like Hyunber something. lol

i thought this was pretty bad, but i read over some of it yesterday when i saw ur comment and was like, OMG, this is pretty scandalous!! lol

THANKS FOR READING HUN!!!!! :D

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sillykilljoys September 2 2011, 23:41:54 UTC
Hyunber....-shivers-

I friggin in love with Amber...seriously. asjdfklsjdfkl;asdjkfla;jdfkl JUST THINKING ABOUT IT MAKES ME ALL FLUSTERED. LOL /flails

..^0^ really?... Well, now I know where to get my fix of Hyunber...xD Mmm...It'll popularize... maybe..O.O ARE THERE EARLIER ONES THAT YOU WROTE OF THIS PAIRING? jasdklf;jasdl;f'dslkas;ldga;lskjdfjsd;fljasdl;fkjasdfj okay. I'ma go stalk your journal for them thenn~ kekekekekekekekeeee.

Omg dude. You have no idea. This stuff is HOT. IT'S MORE THAN SCANDALOUS.

WELCOME, LOVEE!!! 8D

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devilslover422 September 3 2011, 04:37:20 UTC
hahahahaha, i feel the same way!!! lol

um, if u stalked ten u might have seen it, but if not, ive only written one before this one and it's not smut but fluff, of how they got together. lol i forget what its called. im awful. lol

it is pretty amazing. i mean i really liked the way i did this story. i was reading it while i was on the phone with my phone company this morning and trying to scream when i read certain words, cuz i was sooo shocked I wrote them. lmao!!

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chibikidz September 9 2011, 05:56:53 UTC
...me gusta

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devilslover422 September 9 2011, 16:37:18 UTC
i lol'd sooooo hard at this. lol

i really glad u like it and thank u for reading!!!!! :D

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chibikidz September 9 2011, 17:47:30 UTC
NO PROBLAMO COMPADRE!....omg Spanish overdrive LOL

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