I'll Wait

[devilslover422]

NichKhun

Khun had been out there for a year to the day. The war had gone on for a year longer than expected and Wooyoung had sent word, but Khun never got it if he was out here the whole time. He now felt like this was entirely his fault. There was nothing he could do and that made him feel even worse.

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Comments

[cipherstar]

.......?
what...?
aishh... T_T
i love how you describe the transition of time..how the bud grows, how the basket becomes smelly..
does he even know that Woo came at last?
What am I waiting for? Why do I even care?
it's sad that these are his last thoughts T_T

to tell you the truth, i was handling it well until i my dear Wooyoung comes home.
my heart just ached and shattered all over the place...huhu

thanks for the oneshot dear ^___^

p/s: and i'm dying for Choc Devotion :P hehe

[devilslover422]

1ST COMMENT WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

i think my fave part might be the transitioning too, but it was also the hardest. trying to bring everything together and have it make sense. since this is a rushed one shot, im glad it worked out.

i had hoped everyone would have gotten it but i'll explain. lol in a way wooboo did know that khun was there and i try to play it in with their hearts beating together. like wooyoung knew khun was there so he could finally let go and stop waiting. lol weird i know. lol SORRY!! :(

omg, it is sad!!! i swear i just write things and have like a hue jumble of emotions at the time, but then u guys come in a comment and im able to think straight! lol THANK U!!!

of course u were handling it well, khun was dying and wooyoung's wasn't getting hurt. lol of course he does think its his fault and they are having a romeo and juliet type thing going on. lol

THANK FOR READING HUN!!!! AND I AM GETTING ON TOP OF CHOCO DEVOTION RIGHT NOW!!! LOL :D

[shinzara]

I SPOT I SPOT I SPOT! I spot because I can, I will and I have!!!

[shinzara]

THEY WILL ONLY BE HAPPY IN MY MIND WON'T THEY?!?! Whyyy!!! You love seeing us being tortured like this don't you?!

I absolutely loved the way you wrote this, the descriptions on the oak tree and it's just enough hurt in the words that makes your heart cringe. Nichkhun was just too much in love ;___;

LOVED it. As always. Ahaha

[devilslover422]

im afraid so honeybeans!! lol they just cant be happy, whatsoever!!!! unfortunately, i get thru angst faster than i get thru the fluffy fluff. lol

god u make me wanna cry!!! khunnie was sooo much in love that he sat his ass out there for a year!!!!! lol i mean even if realistically he wud have died sometime before that, it's still a heart clench-er. i love them in pain!! and to think now wooyoung is gonna sit out there and die just to be with khun again.!! omg!!! lol i kill myself. soooo romeo and juliet-esque.

thank u sooo much for reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AS ALWAYS!!! :D

[miyahearts]

wow. that hurt... but it hurt so good. once again, amazing work. can we switch brains for a day so i could draw some inspiration from your writing genius?

needless to say, I LOVE IT! :)

[devilslover422]

yo, i wud not mind switching brains, whatsoever!!!!! lol u pin stories like drinking water!! it takes me forever now!! im sooo slow these days and im starting not to finish stuff. it's truly sad. lol seriously, i can look at a straw and come up with story. it's quite mad, but something that i love.

thank u soooo much for the compliment!!!! i love when u guys hurt good. lol so dumb, sorry. lol

THANKS FOR READING HUN!!! :D

[walkingparadoxx]

"i hope you cry alot" lmao ilu. This was so sad omg wae

[devilslover422]

lmao!!! omg ur icon is killing me!!! lol ur words mixed with it make it sooo believable. lol

im really glad u feel that it was sad!!!! my job is done!!! lol

thanks for reading!!!!!! :D

[hwite]

oh mannnnnn! I was hoping so much that Woo would have a good reason for making Khun wait and you totally did write it so well. And ahhh I want to see them together so badly ):
On another note, I've read and really enjoyed all your Khunyoung fics so do you think you could add me so I can read the older locked ones? Thanks!

[devilslover422]

thanks alot hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 yeah woo and khun never get the good love th deserve, but of course, that's my fault. lol

one day they will get what they deserve!!!!! i promise to write it myself! lol

they shud be unlocked. i don't lock my fics on this site, but on inorae, so if u go thru on my page, then u shud be good.

Thank for reading!!!!!!!!!!! :D

[devilslover422]

i will add u tho. lol sorry i forgot to say that. lol

[hwite]

awesome haha I shall wait for you to write it then!((: and no problem I think I've read some of your fics like the Khunyoung family one multiple times!!(: